Zack Fair on Remnant

Con completa honestidad es un muy buen fan fic, con una historia bastante entretenida, en la cual el autor utilizo increiblemente bien la historia original y la adapto de forma tal que logro una muy buena interaccion entre su personaje original y los personajes de la historia.

Not bad. Actually it's good. Really good but the update rate is a little slow. But Other than that The story is perfect. There are some grammer mistakes but he said it's his first book so it had to be expected. And the writing quality for a first timer is superb. Good Story. Keep up the good work

I actually like the way the story Is going. The way its going though i feel like it going to turn into a op slice of life story also dont really like the yandere In the story donT really care for them

This is a fairly early review but so far its a pretty good read. The one major problem I see is the author is writing from a 3rd person point of view but then accidentally uses a 1st person point of view. It’s incredibly jarring and the only gripe I have. When the narrator is summarizing whats happening it shouldn’t seem like the MC is speaking.