xAlexiax
I only read the 1st chapter but this is what I can say. The way that the author makes the chapter light at first, then dark after a few words. The way the author builds up tension is great. The narrating is easy to read and the plot is really interesting. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work author-san.
To be honest, this is a great work. It has been awhile since I found a good novel to read. The way the author has described the characters, background is truly mesmerizing. The plot is amazing. The writing style is so refined, I can imagine things infront of my eyes. I loved it. Already added to my collections. Great work Author!!🤗😊
For one, revenge is always my favorite. Revenge with a secret admirer in tow, is just the best. the story starts off pretty fast, which is just the way it should be. What's the point of saying it's a reborn - revenge then dragging the random sob story for ten initial chapters? you could explain that some where else along the way. I like the way the tone of characters is set with few simple scenes, and am very much looking forward to more..
Honestly, there isn't much to say about it, since there are only two chapters. There's even less described in them than in the summary, since the summary adds that both main leads are going to be reborn later. But, the premise has a lot of potential for an interesting story! Now you just need to actually write it!