13 Reflection (since some people can't read)
Who am I?
I am Asher Eclipse, I have been in this world for Two and a half week now, this world is very strange, I am very strange, I suddenly appeared in a place called Gotham City, with some weird information in my head, I knew I could not be from this universe for the things I know show the future and past, it also says there are an infinite number of universes and this DC universe holds an entire multiverse that has yet to be explored, let alone an omniverse.
I am apparently 15 years old, and in the Dc universe, lucky for me I know how to speak english and read english too, I stole some money by copying a street kid, and it turns out people can not see me, unless I want them to, I can see things, hear things, feel things, smell things, even taste things, my senses are enhance, i can even see in the dark, and it seems that they continue to grow in range and strength.
The place I started in was dirty, filthy and the air was polluted to the point I felt nauseated to feeling the air and then to add to the mix of smelling it and tasting it and even seeing it, was a pain, but lucky for me I found away to lock one of my senses, before it grew too much for me to handle.
My first time in this world, I looked for shelter cause based on the information I have, I might be a vampire and I confirmed this when I tasted human blood, It was so sweet and addicting, but knowing the rules of this world I held off on killing, plus this information in my head is telling me to join the heroes, I don't know why, but it's a good start, plus it gives me a lot of benefits to finally relax and get to know this place more for myself.
I am not a bad guy, I am a good guy, just like you, you humans who eat, I as well eat, but im i a bad guy because my food is different from yours? aren't you bad guys for eating animals and meat? At least I don't kill my food, unlike you, I am peaceful, if I had a chance to get fed without having to hurt someone or let my inner desire and beast out I will take it.
We all have our demons and I let mine out due to negligence, forgetting that I have not adapted to my strongest sense after locking it away, I am lucky no one died and I am lucky the heroes were somewhat understanding, they gave me a place to stay and be safe, people my age to communicate with and expected nothing from me.
I am no ones dog, I am my own person who is just trying to find out where they are and who they are, knowing my name is just the first step, i must develop and find myself.
apart from the knowledge in my head, I know nothing else, just the basics that is probably far outdated knowing how far the technology in this universe go.
I have not tested out my weakness to the sun, and I really don't want to, but after learning some things from batman, I'd have to test it sooner or later.
This ring on my hand, isn't just to protect me, it is also to protect others from me, it is best for them to keep me here,if they don't and i decided to become a criminal, could they stop me?, if the villains like lex luthor get a hold off me, wouldn't he be able to clone me and create an army? what if i decided to make everyone a vampire, can I even do that?
If the villains find out I can gain aspects of those i drink from, do you think I would be sitting here in my bed safe and sound without people trying to capture and brain wash me? I am fast but I still need to eat, and still need to hide from the sun, where would I get a moment of peace? would they be able to track me?
Do you not understand? I AM LOST, I DON'T KNOW WHO I AM! WHY I AM HERE! DID I HAVE A FAMILY? DID I EXIST BEFORE SOMEWHERE? IS THE KNOWNLEDGE IN MY HEAD MINE OR NOT? WAS I CREATED? AM I A CLONE? DO I EVEN EXIST? IS THIS SOME KIND OF SIMULATION? IS THIS REAL? AM I REAL?
But do you care? am I some form of entertainment? am I a movie? a tv show? or text on a piece of blank page? or is this me am I real?
These thoughts roam my head every chance I have a moment of peace a moment to relax and just think, I am afraid and alone...I have no one who understands, well maybe I do, superboy probably understands, we are both lost and shoved right into a world with barely any guidance apart from the knowledge already in our heads.
"*Sigh* I need to get out of my head and focus on what to do now?" but first, I need a meal, getting up, I walked over to the fridge, taking a bag of blood, I ripped open the top without making a mess and poured a glass full.
taking my sweet time, I made my way over to the sofa, tablet and blood in hand, I took a seat and began to take light sips of blood, according to the flash this is the best way to control my desire, seeing as he eats a lot, it takes a lot of control to be satisfied with a small meal when pretending to be a normal human, and his logic applies well to me.
I try not to let it get to me, not to let myself drown in sorrow, I try to be strong, but truly I am scared, I might be mature for my age (2 and a half weeks old) but I am still a child in the grand scheme of things.
I can't control everything, I just want to belong, I want to not be alone, If I can turn others into vampire, would they stay with me? would they leave me for their own agendas? I don't know...all I can do now is focus on what I can learn, what skills I can develop, and how I can use my unique abilities to protect myself.
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(A/N: A short chapter to show what Asher is going through, his thoughts and fears, I wanted to introduce them slowly into the story, but people tend to forget he is only a child, one who does not know what they are doing, one who is lost and alone.
The world is not a kind place and just because he doesnt show it doesn't mean he does not feel.)
(A/N: NOW YOU MY DEAR READERS, HAVE BEEN A FANTASTIC SUPPORT, some question my writing so please leave your questions in the comments and I will answer them without spoiling too much. now for word count I will past some response to some reviews.)
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Superman92
"so usually you are always very pompous in your chapters and that is always the case however there are a lot of things missing we go from the fight to his return to the team. he's not yelled at by Superman Batman, we don't know what made him lose his temper. they join the team directly, no question of questioning reprieve he should rather leave. and it's the stupid accessories a ring, an AI created by Batman? 🤪 gadgets 😮💨"
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Master_Atlest
Did you not read the previous chapters? the reason he lost his temper is due to him losing control after breathing, the none polluted atmosphere did not dilute the sense of blood and if you read during his time in gotham, he clearly stated how his senses were growing, he has not breathed since chapter 3, this boy has not grown to adapt to his new senses and legit released it in a new environment, its like living in the sewers and suddenly going to the surface in a market where the ai is clean and there is the fresh smell of food everywhere, what do you think will happen to you?
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Master_Atlest
and it's legit said that the Martian manhunter knows the reason why he lost control. Like, are you really reading or just a hater?These gadgets and things he got were the terms he asked for when Batman met him in Gotham. You are in a world and know nothing apart from what is already in your head. How do you find out which world you are in? You read, you have a mentor and assistance, and you have something that can protect and secure your life. Do I have to spoon-feed you for you to understand what has already been written? Stop looking for loop holes, because I made sure there were none. I am making a plot here stop b*tching over things that are not even an issue.
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Review
Superman92 [3/5 stars]
it's much too pompous(self-important), sentences are repeated, and the mc doesn't have a clear objective, there are also things that are wrong, we don't know when they were, is it the creation of the 'team ? surely not since raven, powergirl, zatara are there but this is not explained at any time. Batman's trust in a stranger who is looking to be recruited is weird too.
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Master_Atlest
Would you like the story if I gave you everything? Is that how a story is meant to be written? Isn't it better to discover what time period he is in, which DC universe he is in? Isn't it better to go with the story rather than have everything? None of the sentences were repeated, If you read it like that, then I worry for your English. I like pacing, I don't speed run things, I like the story development, he had a goal, join the heroes, but that wasn't even his goal, He has some knowledge, but he himself doesn't know much about the world and what it holds, How can he make a goal based on knownledge that isn't his knowledge? What if this wasn't the same world in his knowledge? Look, i get it, You are impatient and don't want the story to develop, and i am sorry I can't satisfy your urge for a speed run, but I am writing a story here, not a summary. If you don't like proper English and story writing, please leave in peace and do not ruin my review section. I will leave this review here and take it into consideration. I have been trying to constantly improve my writing, so bare with me and give proper criticism before reviewing. Also, "there are also things that are wrong." There is nothing wrong, I am going based on everything I have watched in the TV series and I have not made a single mistake, Going by the age of Superboy, you could easily tell which timeline we are in if you find something "wrong," but clearly you aren't, so please keep your doubts that don't align with the story to yourself.
(A/N: I hope this addresses your concerns and issue with the book Superman92 and the 2 others who liked his comment
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Shout out to those who have been a great support to this fanfiction, you guys keep me going:
Wanderley_Sobral with a 5 out of 5 star, truly thank you!!
Smut_reader0 with a 4 out of 5 stars, Thank you!
I like it hope you keep updating it has really good potential 😁👍
Ques21 with a 4 out of 5 stars, Thank you!
Pretty good I hope the story keeps going
(A/N: I will Thank you all)
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questions to address:
Leon_Luis_
Harem or No Harem??? . important question
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Master_Atlest
I have never written a harem before because I have never experienced it. I can't write with great proper realism if I have never seen one with actual realism to it. So for now, no, although if I gain some experience, I might do so.
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Romance_guy
Does mc make a vampire family? Or clan
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Master_Atlest
You've had this question for a while now, the answer to that question will be answered in future chapters, please enjoy the journey! if the mc wants, he shall receive, after all this story is in his hands.
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Contribution shout outs to!!!
Myself with a contribution of 59 (I didn't really do much, only power stoned some when we were close to the goal.)
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And the rest off you too, thank you so much for the support!!
