Reviews of Yggdrasil's Pupil
Yggdrasil's Pupil
Zombie
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Read the first chapter. If it makes you smile at least once keep going. Careful the author is insane! He will turn everything into a joke! EVERYTHING! (┛ಠ_ಠ)┛彡┻━┻ Slow start, MC that discovers a new magical world. Will feel slice of life at time, but it’s all slowly coming together. Worldbuilding will come with time. Well, there is already key information in the first chapters. As a writer, I’m a big fan of misunderstandings, comedy, and op protagonists. OP protagonist yet not steamrolling everything, he needs to learn his own powers. But he is and will remain badass. ( •̀‿• ́)ﻭ✧ If there are any errors anywhere, feel free to point them out so I can fix them. ( ￣ー￣)φ__ #Disclaimer read this novel at your own risks.# #Side-effects may include: # Wasting countless hours, maniacal laughter at ungodly hours, extreme disgust, sleep deprivation, cold & hot sweating, plant kink, hair growth, balding, aging (apparent after a few centuries), superpowers (low occurrence), an ominous lack of side-effect that will drive you crazy, the will to live, bass boosted heartbeats, humanity, demon lord voice, cute anime girl voice, loss of common sense, raging erection (all genders), turning 5/7 cyborg, opening a zoo, tentacles, crossdressing, hot & cold sweating, madness, mecha combining, sudden combustion, and more!
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*WARNING!* Do not read if you are prone to depressi0n. The story is so insanely good that it will leave you in an abyss of despair when the chapters run out. It will mercilessly leave you yearning for more every single day! It’s similar to a lovely, gorgeous girIfriend you love oh so dearly, and want to screw every day, but her Iibido is nonexistent. So yeah, go read if you have a strong mind.
I am now beyond the 100 chapter mark and it is time for a review. The first thing to mention is that this story has a unique writing style which seemingly directly represents the turbulent sometimes also jumpy thoughts of the main character. A special mention to the fun forest characters that all seemingly have absurd quirks. The story didn't quite hit my sense of humor but I stil enjoyed and read everything posted up to now. Everyone has different humor so I wouldn't take this as a negative point. The antics and turbulent life of the MC still make me smile for their creative nature. Interestingly there are some deeper questions about morals and some modern critique hidden in some chapters and some are really emotionally touching. To summarize, the main reason I enjoyed reading as much as I did is that the story is told in an emotionally acessible way and takes you on an adventure with all it's quirks. Now for some critique. Due ti the nature of the writing, some chapters make no real progress in the MC's adventure and rather tell about him stuck in his mind. This is mot necessarily negative but I still felt it was a bit much at times. This also meant that for now the world discovery (anount we know a bout the worldbuilding) is very slow. It's hard to propperly critique the worldbackground since I have yet to know what it is. Eventhough the MC ask himself loads of questions in his head he rarely finds actual answers. On the other hand I think the author does have the world planned out because the little we got to know for now is a solid foundation without contradictions. That's it for my overly thurogh review. Many thanks for publishing your book for us to read, it takes curage and dedication. Keep going, you're doing great!
writing quality- barely any mistakes. updating stability- author currently has 4 books that they are updating steadily but still gives 2-3 chapters a day for each. story development- as stated it is slice of life and pretty slow at the start but it is still great. character design- so far all characters are unique and different from each other. world background - i still see nothing wrong with it at all i do not see why this doesnt have more reads. The story is great and the author has great energy. There also isnt cliche parts like all those other novels so im not sure🤷♂️ other than that, keep up the great work Author!! Youre doing absolutely amazing with your other books as well!
