Life Choices
Review until Chater 38: Until the end of the latest chapter, the system never appeared except for that one time. After that it just went AWOL. Moreover, the building hasnβt been given yet. The background of the FL hasnβt been fully explained but rather shown thru her actions, i.e. Hacking. So letβs assume sheβs a genius all-rounder. There are too many plot holes in the story so far. Like where in the world did she get her chip which she used in her previous world? There was no mention of having a space so far besides the AWOL System. The naming of the characters was a bit funny. The cannon fodders are surnamed Chenβs and Linβs. Easy to remember and dispose of. I guess this book does not follow the others of using tons of chapters just to have one scene. Anyhoo, itβs an okay read so far. The FL is spunky. Anyone has the raws for this?πππ
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I imagine that you poured your soul into the writing of this piece, and the authenticity shows. You provide a gratifying social context that illustrates both the sad reality of young people forced by events to live in an environment of fear, and also the disquieting vulnerability of expatriate life in another country during a time. Your writing is accomplished and I found your story both moving and fascinating.
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