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XP Grind

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Quiescent_Rumble
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I liked the start of the book very much. Then it got...childish. Woman in danger, rescue her, use some chapters to help her find a bed. Of course she is beautiful. Who would have thought that? Someones tries to hurt him, he hurts them then heals them and does not even take their money even when he really needs it? The "story" is too much that of a do-good-boy, boy scout. TOO much of a good guy. It is sickening. The writing per se is not bad, but it is always describing, never telling a story. It is like you see something on TV and describe it to someone on the phone. It is not like a book. I am sure there are professional word to describe this problem, but I have no experience in this area. I just know the writing feels weird.

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Zehell2218
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is this story inspired from "The Gamer" since I feel like it's so similar 🤔 anyway u got a good plot right there just make sure to create interesting synopsis since synopsis is everything for reader who will read ur book. Keep going and don't slack off! *whip*

mindaugask1
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The start is quite nice.

ShinSungmi
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The grammar requires some proofreading, and other than it, it is a well-written story. These are not usually what I go for, but nevertheless, it an amazing story.

Everything_Forever
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PuffyFluppy
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interesting

Elika_Adam
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The overall CURRENT status of this novel seems very pleasing, it has a nice theme to it. I think overall it will be a very nice and active novel towards the end, Its only 6 pages in and im ready for more. Keep up the good work!

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Turista
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Cómo no tengo nada que comentar te enseño a usar el teclado Ctrl + E - Seleccionar todo Ctrl + N - Negrita Ctrl + C - Copiar Ctrl + D - Rellenar Ctrl + B - Buscar Ctrl + G - Guardar Ctrl + L - Reemplazar Ctrl + K - Italic Ctrl + U - Nuevo libro de trabajo Ctrl + A - Abrir Ctrl + P - Imprimir Ctrl + R - Nada bien Ctrl + S - Subrayado Ctrl + V - Pegar Ctrl W - Cerrar Ctrl + X - Cortar Ctrl + Y - Repetir Ctrl + Z - Deshacer F1 - Ayuda F2 - Edición F3 - Pegar el nombre F4 - Repite la última acción. F4 - Al ingresar una fórmula, cambie entre referencias absolutas / relativas F5 - Ir a F6 - Panel siguiente F7 - Corrector ortográfico F8 - Ampliación del modo. F9 - Recalcular todos los libros F10 - Activar la barra de menú F11 - Nueva gráfica F12 - Guardar como Ctrl +: - Insertar la hora actual Ctrl +; - Insertar la fecha actual. Ctrl + "- Copia el valor de la celda arriba Ctrl + '- Copia la fórmula de la celda de arriba Cambio - Ajuste de compensación para funciones adicionales en el menú de Excel Shift + F1 - ¿Qué es? Shift + F2 - Editar comentario de celda Shift + F3 - Pegar la función en la fórmula Shift + F4 - Buscar siguiente Mayús + F5 - Buscar Mayús + F6 - Panel anterior Mayús + F8 - Añadir a la selección Shift + F9 - Calcular la hoja de cálculo activa Shift + F10 - Visualización del menú emergente Shift + F11 - Nueva hoja de cálculo Mayús + F12 - Guardar Ctrl + F3 - Establecer nombre Ctrl + F4 - Cerrar Ctrl + F5 - XL, tamaño de la ventana de restauración Ctrl + F6 - Ventana del siguiente libro de trabajo Shift + Ctrl + F6 - Ventana del libro de trabajo anterior Ctrl + F7 - Mover ventana Ctrl + F8 - Cambiar tamaño de ventana Ctrl + F9 - Minimizar el libro de trabajo Ctrl + F10 - Maximizar o restaurar ventana Ctrl + F11 - Insertar 4.0 hoja de macros Ctrl + F1 - Abrir archivo Alt + F1 - Insertar un gráfico Alt + F2 - Guardar como Alt + F4 - Salida Alt + F8 - Cuadro de diálogo macro Alt + F11 - Editor de Visual Basic Alt + 64 - @ CTRL + Esc. Puedes regresar rápidamente a la pantalla de inicio. Y aquí no ha pasado nada. Ctrl + Shift + F3 - Crear un nombre usando los nombres de las etiquetas de fila y columna Ctrl + Shift + F6 - Ventana anterior Ctrl + Shift + F12 - Impresión Alt + Shift + F1 - Nueva hoja de cálculo Alt + Shift + F2 - Guardar Alt + = - AutoSum Ctrl + `- Cambiar valor / visualización de la fórmula Ctrl + Shift + A - Insertar los nombres de los argumentos en la fórmula Alt + flecha abajo - lista de vista automática Alt + '- Formato de diálogo de estilo Ctrl + Shift + ~ - Formato general Ctrl + Shift + @ - Formato de hora Ctrl + Shift + # - Formato de fecha Ctrl + Shift + $ - Formato de moneda Ctrl + Shift +% - Formato de porcentaje Ctrl + Shift + ^ - Formato exponencial Ctrl + Shift + & - Coloque el borde del contorno alrededor de las celdas seleccionadas Ctrl + Shift + _ - Eliminar el borde del contorno Ctrl + Shift + * - Seleccione la región actual

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miseringring
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