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XP Grind

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Quiescent_Rumble
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I liked the start of the book very much. Then it got...childish. Woman in danger, rescue her, use some chapters to help her find a bed. Of course she is beautiful. Who would have thought that? Someones tries to hurt him, he hurts them then heals them and does not even take their money even when he really needs it? The "story" is too much that of a do-good-boy, boy scout. TOO much of a good guy. It is sickening. The writing per se is not bad, but it is always describing, never telling a story. It is like you see something on TV and describe it to someone on the phone. It is not like a book. I am sure there are professional word to describe this problem, but I have no experience in this area. I just know the writing feels weird.

Zehell2218
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is this story inspired from "The Gamer" since I feel like it's so similar 🤔 anyway u got a good plot right there just make sure to create interesting synopsis since synopsis is everything for reader who will read ur book. Keep going and don't slack off! *whip*

mindaugask1
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The start is quite nice.

ShinSungmi
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The grammar requires some proofreading, and other than it, it is a well-written story. These are not usually what I go for, but nevertheless, it an amazing story.

Everything_system8
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PuffyFluppy
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interesting

Elika_Adam
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The overall CURRENT status of this novel seems very pleasing, it has a nice theme to it. I think overall it will be a very nice and active novel towards the end, Its only 6 pages in and im ready for more. Keep up the good work!

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miseringring
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