this novel is all about making the mc appear grand for no reason. This is always unjustified. for example: The mc just got his battle pet, its alife for like 5 minutes. the city is under attack, he first watched and comments everything that happens, while a lot of veterans are fighting. those all are described as having a lot of battle experience. they can't handle it, but then the mc comes, having never fought a battle in his entire life with his barely born battle pet and stands out
Story starts out interesting and the premise and system had some promise. Too bad the author can't keep his facts straight, he's all over the place. Changes the talents, changes his level back and forth, randomly adds missions after ch 25. MC Sells beast eggs on the net using his laptop, but they don't have electricity? How does he charge his laptop or have internet? The summary isn't even correct.
I really wanted to like this book...it started off decently enough ... we saw the system at work and the adventure began....however by chapter 20 the plotholes began to be so big that you cant continue to ignore them and by chp 30 they are soooooo huge that i couldnt continue to read it 😩...good luck u guys
Synopsis has me utterly confused. It talks about a situation when he gets into university with his snake being made fun of. That snake just so happens to be publicly accepted as a divine rank beast prior to even joining a university. I’m baffled with what the synpopsis says will happen. He also, spoiler, has two more divine eggs that will most likely hatch before university. Someone explain because webnovel’s MTL isn’t explaining it for me.
The story development and character design is trash. In story development, there is no foreshadowing whatsoever. The synopsis is also misleading cause you'll think he will hatch a snake and evolve it afterwards right? WRONG!! He got the twin headed snake from the very beginning. The character design is also bad. There is also no foreshadowing when he introduces character. Plus the logic is all messed up. You will think that a beast egg from a wasp will turn into a wasp right? WRONG AGAIN! Its random. However this is still acceptable, but what about the lack of risks? When he hatched two more divine beast eggs you'll think there's some sort of risk like imploding right? WRONG AGAIN! No risk mentioned whatsoever. The goldfinger is also very vauge. The functions should have been mentioned earlier on. The background information of MC should also be mentioned earlier on. I still don't know how he got to this world. The MCs goldfinger has very good potential if executed and written properly, but sadly its bad. Its okay to read I guess but not a quality read. Overall good idea, but trashy execution.
It's frustrating to read this book. You can never figure out what's going on with the MC and his beasts. Every other chapter the name of the beast and their moves changes and the MC level is always fluctuating. You can never tell if he is in one level or the next. If you just want to waste time and don't really care about consistency of the novel go ahead an read it.
Friendly WARNING before you read this This novel is : - Neverending Bronze rank - Never ending saving friend/ally - Weak allies and Strong Enemy - Author has serious dentia/amnesia - Copy + Paste Stats Window - Dont trust the numbers here. it always doesnt change Ex. He is already at that rank then his next evolve is still that same rank in his last rankup. in short He always stays at Bronze
The first 20 chapters were great, I thought this book could go on for a while but right after the part you have to pay for I noticed I kept thinking "bull." It's like the author forgot previous setups, went back to try to fix some of it, then let the rest rot in a confusing mess. Maybe I just don't understand or it got lost in translation but it is just too frustrating to bother with. The only reason for the overall score to be a 3 is due to my trust in webnovels update stability, this book should get a 2, and only because the first 20 chapters were good. The 8 I read after get a 0 in my book.