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I read through chapter 7. I like the story. The story has a bit of comedy that I enjoyed. I thought the writing was decent, but the biggest issue is probably the expressions and dialogue. The story has good enough fluid, but it's fast-paced and ambiguous. I thought the MC was whatever. The MC is your stereotypical transmigrator who thinks the world revolves around them. But I thought it was cool to include ravens as it adds uniqueness to the story. I also liked the MC's power not included as a mutant. Overall, I'll rate this at a 3/5.
I just want to say that the jokes author gives are not really funny. if author-chan could make it a lil bit serious that would be great.
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This fanfic presents an intriguing premise that blends the Sharingan of Naruto with the expansive MCU. However, despite its promising concept, the execution is marred by several notable flaws. One commendable aspect of the fanfic is its inventive method of transporting the protagonist to another dimension. The incorporation of humor and creativity in this teleportation process adds an entertaining layer to the narrative, setting a playful tone from the outset. The introduction of the X-Men into the MCU landscape injects fresh possibilities for storytelling, introducing new dynamics and adversaries. The decision to limit the protagonist's knowledge of the MCU prevents the story from feeling overly predictable, allowing for unexpected developments and challenges to arise. Unfortunately, the writing style leaves a lot to be desired. Short, choppy sentences detract from the flow of the prose, while dialogue often feels stilted and unnatural, hindering immersion in the story. A major sticking point is the characterization of the main protagonist. The choice to depict them as a seasoned mercenary with preternatural combat skills and an immediate mastery of the Sharingan feels contrived, skipping over opportunities for meaningful character development. The rapid acquisition of powers diminishes the sense of struggle and growth that could have enriched the narrative. Moreover, the protagonist's edgy and aggressive demeanor undermines their purported goal of safeguarding the world from future threats. Actions such as hypnotizing and brainwashing individuals, as well as engaging in threatening behavior towards authorities, paint a concerning picture of their moral compass. Instead of inspiring unity and cooperation, their antisocial tendencies raise doubts about their ability to lead effectively.
I have been on webnovel for a long time this is one of the ff I read
Good fanfic till now. please don't drop this. Hey can anyone tell me the name of the fanfic " where mc is reincarnated in Marvel world but it also includes friends (tv show) in Marvel world "
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the story is op plz don't drop it . and made davidxwanda plz
Originally I felt confused, but then I read more and. .. .noice~ Just one question: What happens if he throws Nokia 3310 to Thanos? π€
New reader here because I saw Sharingan in MCU and I'm about to dive into the unknown and I hope I won't regret giving it a five star TenseiRenniSharingan for the Win (Tenseigan, Rinnegan and Sharingan)
I didn't need to read the book the description alone sold it π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
It's a quite good MCU fanfiction!! MC (David) has an OP power (Sharingan), so it's a bit of boring because his power.. But I like how David doesn't want to change the plot and how he's not have all of his power (sharingan, nature chakra, etc), but have it little by little.. Can't wait to read next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san πππππ
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What do you mean by different partners??? Like One relationship over and then a second one(normal dating kind of thing)???? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
E bem interessante, mas acho que o escritor nao e muito experiente para escrever, mas esta bom, so falta um fluxo melhor, e meio forΓ§ado as conversas, mas deve ser a falta de experiΓͺncia e a falta de familiaridade com o inglΓͺs.
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