Confused?

Hey! You might be confused, "Wasnt there 22 chapters?!", yes!, there was!, but they were old, like a year old, and they had bad quality of writing, and what am I now? A better writer! With better understanding of character development, actions, and story movement!

My old story was to fast paced, I ran a horse race every chapter and got burnt in the future for it, my character was interesting but not proactive or involved in the world, it seemed like doctor who if it was written by a child, everywhere at once! 6 different worlds with new levels of power and systems of magic being introduced every chapter, I mean it was hard for me to keep track!

So I started rewriting as some people with keen memory may remember, but then by chapter 2, the direction I was going was so different, I thought " Damn, rewriting this is going to be confusing on the reader if he ignores the [#/22] sign, which many most definitely will, cause no one reads author comments if there longer than a sentence. ", so I deleted them all and am trying to get on a

1 CHAPTER a DAY, process, which I have had before, I dont tell a lie! Its just, without comments I have no motivation outside of music and dreams, but I dont dream the same thing and most songs dont have the same mood, so getting inspired for this novel is hard due to its very specific character being a ever-evolving magical entity known as a spirit.

So short story, feed me comments! Even if its +1 or first, I dont really care, just knowing theres actual people reading this is inspiration to not keep it in my head, but on a page!

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