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First start with writing quality. it's clear, easy to read. sometimes it's more clear than its needs to be. overall I find it better than few of the contracted authors'. You get the clear idea of the tone of the story reading the first few chapters. And it's described well. The only problem that I could pick is the same I found myself most problem with-- show don't tell. there's good work in telling the back story but it would be great if you show their innermost feelings and physical reaction. overall it looks promising. Good Day writing....
I really like the story so far. Itβs quite unique than most transmigration or tine traveling story Iβve read. I also like how the fl is the villainess. Iβm actually looking forward on how the story will progress. I just hope this will have a good ending. Also, thank you for updating daily. I appreciate it.
The idea behind this novel is incredible! It's very creative and fun to read, and i don't think i've read a novel with such a plot before. The only thing that bothers me, is the grammatical errors. There's a lot of incorrect use of words, but besides that, the story is great! I recommend that you spend some time, reading through your writing, to catch the misspellings and errors. Other than that, i like it! Keep up the good work, author. <3
Beautiful plot with unexpected unique twist. Flowy writing style. Wonderful story development. Interesting characters with surprises in store. Itβs interesting to find the author herself playing the character of the villainess inside her novel. That would help her gain insight and deeper understanding of the villainess.
I am very pleased to see such an amazing novel! It was so good that I didn't know that I have already read a few chapters! The characters were very lifelike and realistic. With emotions to let us see their character. The plot was steadily building up and it was nice! The worldbuilding was vast and detailed. I like how you explain the nooks and crannies in your craft. Overall, It was easy to get lost in your novel as it was very immersive! I will wait for your work to reach a million views and that will be pleasing to the eyes! Kudos and good luck! Peace βοΈ