The mystery in this is actually really good! It got me hooked with the political intrigue and family drama ✨ The descriptions can be simple at times but the overall writing style has a really nice flow to it! I feel like the scenes are very well woven together and flows so smoothly,as a new author, I'm kinda jelous! It's been a great read so far!
Wow, What great work. You are writing very smartly. Not telling the whole thing but leaving hints here and there. I love the way you present it. I cannot point out any obvious flaw but your update stability. So 1 ch daily will do wonders for the book. Waiting for more chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Neat and good writing. The story runs smoothly. It made me enjoy the experience of reading this webnovel. Oh, right. The use of capital letters in several word prefixes is quite important as well as the use of commas and periods. It will make your story easy to read.
Great work! I loved the start of the story The kingdoms are connected through blood and that's every unique Moreover, the main characters are very good..
This is really a nice story. I love it. Keep writing your story. Author, I hope you will do your best.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
five star, why not . i love how the synopsis has me curious and i love how you have this dying need to know what's next or what's happening .
GASP what an awesome story. Such fabulous lines. amazing explanation. This book is wonderful. The plot grabs you in its cage and you can't leave the book. This is a master piece. GO AUTHOR GO FOR IT
The novel has a well written description as well as good writing style. I like good description of things as with it I can almost imagine the incidents happen in front of my eyes. You did a great job author describing it and I like the MC too and how is the story progressing.
Spell spell spell writer spelled on us with his amazing writing skills. Falling in love with this. My favorite most book it's name itself mysterious hiding something in itself like story. Love arbor ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕
Pretty decent, and eyes catching too, but I gotta ask, romance?
The synopsis is super captivating. The story and characters are both interesting. I read first few chapters and I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work 😊
The story is really interesting it piques my interest, I always enjoy reading a chapter it grabs all my attention. its a really good novel, well written and highly recommended. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Your Writing skill is absolutely on whole other next! Your story line is top notch! Interesting story and can’t wait for more update! 😆[img=recommend]
I love Royal stores will write one in future ❤️ Absolutely my taste! how the character was defined !! Highly recommended....keep writing 🤗
Love the story, and how the story progressed. I hope to continue reading this novel. the Characters and their journeys were highly engaging
The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! Nice work author
Surprised. A good read so far! I like the colourful ways in which you describe the characters, and I'm interested in where the story is going!
the synopsis is well written to immediately capture the reader leaving intrigued. The construction of the world is also good, I recommend you read the book
This book has everything. A nice style of writing, the hook. Now, I'm intrigued. The author has done a really good job and I can't wait for more chapters!
The story is progressing really well. The diction is perfect and I can't help but say I was entangled in the story from the start. I hope this book makes it far in the WSA🥰.