fairytail72
Lemme drop a review on this book now. First of all, before I go into criticism mode. This book has an amazing intro with interesting content. Although the writing quality is low, it is still good enough for someone to understand. The theme is interesting. Mafia FL MCs... This is the first and best. The book is good all in all, and I hope the author improves though. Peace.
Chapters are so short that 8 of them could've made two decent sized chapters The male mc is SO ANNOYING, shoplifting an eraser when she was like 5 and because of that one thing refuses to marry her, like what fantasy is he living in? every person has committed a crime at least once no matter how big or small.