Reviews of When Doomsday Comes, I Can Upgrade My Refuge Infinitely

I just started this story today and so far it is very interesting. I like the the combination on the system, reincarnation, as well as an apocalyptic world. If it keeps up I will go forward with buying the win-win.

So for what I assume is a first try by a non native speaker or resident to write a story about America in English its not bad. I feel like it would be better set in the writers country and better researched about things the writer has no experience of such as guns. Honestly the weakest part of the story is bad charecter development and making up way to many things that even 10-15 min of research would show were ridiculous. I'm gonna drop it but I think the author could do better with more experience.

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Welp it seems to be a translation error of a book but a decent read if your willing to look past that. And if you got a back log of passes have at it I guess. Have fun reading if you can. And be good people.

26 free chapters and the others to pay, the only detail is that this story uses characters with author rights. So this story should be in the fanfic section, where it would get a low rating because it's boring and confusing. I appreciate the translator for using a human name for the protagonists, but the game system is rubbish, the story development is too random, and the signs of story cultivation are evident.

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The story is great but only a few free chapters? Some authors put 40 free chapters first. Honestly i was disappointed with it but the story is great so i use all my free tickets and my heart is aching.