it's a good novel but you're being forced to pay for chapter's which is illegal sense it's using copyrighted characters in it from both marvel and DC which is highly illegal so don't expect this novel to be worked on much longer especially now when Disney has started to double down on their copyrighted work. it doesn't matter if you're just using the names like Iron man, hulk,spiderman, batman, frozen man and Venom. i mean come on someone with basic copyright knowledge knows this.
First off it’s criminal to start making people pay at chapter 23 not just for the copyright but the fact is that you’re this greedy to start a 23 for poor writing structure and grammar. Not only that but just like the other user on here said your novel can be taken down in a blink of an eye if they find this. This had good potential but don’t make people pay for half assed writing.
let me give my review on this. first if you ask me woul I recommend this the answer would be no here is my reasons 1 the mc acts like a child 100% of the time and makes plans with no backing or logic ex he goes outside in his truck to go find disel for his gen with a bulletproof Armour spending a fair bit to get this disel then a group of people come over threating him with a gun to tell him why he is buying diesel he could have either shot them or run away with the diesel what does our mc do he trys to find the background or who is backing them by letting them throw his diesel away then he kills him after the guy shoots the mc so what was stopping him from just killing the guy earlier nothing just word count 2 selfish and annoying to stupid degree he falls asleep while using his drone so Vera gave him a blanket and help him bring the drone back so it doesn't get destroyed sound reasonable right nope for mc she touched my stuff and gave me a blanket I should kick her out of my base and beat her up so he grabbed her hair and screams in her face for helping him take care of his stuff there are more dumb stuff he did but this stood out more for me so yeah recommendation 0 definitely not for me and did I forget to mention this happened in the first 25 chaps I tried to go on but I couldn't.
Everything about this novel feels rushed. the characters feel as if Author took a randomizer and then slapped the characters into the story and everyone else in the setting is automatically fine with them beeing there. The grammar and over all English is somewhat readable but horryfying to think this is moneized...
I must say, this us my 1st negative review that i wrote but it has to be done at some point. One can tell that the Author hasn't written many novels, therefore the vocabulary is a bit limited. This point can be dealt with by just imagining different words to replace the overused once. The real problem comes from, the character design/ world building, story development and uncreative/unrealistic events. The main character has basically no character, like he's just some kid in an adult body. Uninterested in almost anything except gaming, hero's and surviving. He hast no drive for anything except of those things. It doesn't help that he is an irrational, emotionless introvert. How will he ever gain character development is beyond me. All this story is about can be summarized as a glorified super hero collection. That's basically it. The system that was supposed to just help an MC getting op at some point in most stories is doing everything for him. Like auto aim a gun for him, tell him what to buy/upgrade, building stuff out off NOTHING. Please at least put something reasonable in it, I beg you. The world building doesn't exist, the only things that are happening are basic apocalyptic scenarios nothing new really. Character's don't interact much and mind there own business, while being happy to just survive. Sorry to be all negative but I was really hoping for something new and exciting. How can I be if all that happens is that the MC deploys his Robo-Super-Legion to solve everything while hiding in his nonsensical bunker that get a system Nanny. Hope you'll improve your creativity, human interaction and sense of hard fought progress.