Reviews of What if? Severus Snape.

hello I'm loving this story has great potential, the world expanded to marvel of unimaginable amounts of adventures, and you write in a way that I like, and very fluid.

You should definitely check this out, it is a different take on HPxMARVEL, the story is very good. The characters are emotive and have a good character development. Definitely not an edge lord story.

Super amazing and I hope it is continued.

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The seven first chap are cool Hope the story continue to be this cool 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👁️👃👁️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I feel like it got worse when the girls started showing up.

This is something incredibly rare, a unique HP fan fiction. This isn't just a retelling of canon like so many other fan fics. It's well written, the story has some real depth, characters are emotive, dialogue is natural, decisions are grounded and believable. Grammar is better than average, there are grammatical issues here and there, but it's not distracting. It's definitely worth checking out.

this is actually pretty good.. thou i wish it as more chapters on it. like how this turn out to be cissy x snape x lily. grammars good. the only downside is i dont know the timeline sadly . lol

From reading this fic so far, this is a good one, the premise are interesting because the MC is Severus not Harry. It have good character development, if you expect Severus became Edgelord, you all edgy boy will be disappointed with it, the development quite logical. Overall it's a Good read.

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well it dropped in ranking cause you re-uploaded the ff while there's no new content after the lemon that's why.............................

Nice story, I suggest others to give it a chance, the chapters long and good. you won't be disappointed.

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i didn't read the FF yet but i am waiting for more chapters to pill up and keeping an eye on the updates to see if this is a serious work that will last or just some side project that will be abandoned or go into a hiatus for ever ***didn't want to leave a review that will have total score that will lover your rating so i will just go with this

Upvote.