Well, nothing much to say except this is a book of a bored author so dont expect much. Even though the quality is not that good the mood that i feel while reading it is good. But... its all ruin cuz of mc’s constant blabber. I mean if you just ask “why?” the mc will go on and on and on and will reveal everything. Basically he is an super open book. He even has a tantrum cuz apparently pnx reveal his secret, but he himself talk about others backgroud of how he get them like they are candy. Even though its not his place to share. Some holes are easily ignored cuz again this is just an ff of a bored author. But his constant revealing anything if someone just ask a question kinda ruin it. It wont bother much if this is a hent*i, but it is not. The plot quality is like ‘protoganist killer’ or something. The bleach one that I dropped when mc go to the human world and soul society, but minus the lemons. In short to many plot armor. And again this is a ff of a bored author. So if your also bored try it, it has a super fast release(50 chaps in 5days). but dont expect much. Chap 1 is funny though and mc got a pretty cool power. Ohh and good grammar.
So overall the fanfic isn’t Terrible but it’s mostly the mc himself that ruins it. He ended up getting the fact that he was immortal and a multiversal traveler told to People, all because he put the phoenix force inside Himself, then he doesn’t think to erase their memories of the Event or straight up kill them, as that type of secret should not be Known by other’s yet he just let’s them know and tells them Way more than he should. the mc is honestly pretty stupid and an open book, it doesn’t help that he throws a tantrum every like 2 chapters but doesn’t Really do Anything to change it, there’s also the fact that There is Way to much talking by the mc, like 90% of the chapter’s nothing happens, There’s literally like 5-7 chapters of shopping. Knowing how author’s are nowadays this review will most likely be deleted, but if anyone see’s this if you like someone Incredibly open about their life, and a boring overall story then you should read this. (This was written on my phone)
hey Ryan I have been a long time reader ever since my multiverse trip was first uploaded I went through 4 phones and thousands of hours and I was constantly at the point of killing myself but reading your fanfic brought true joy from the age of 15 to even now at 19 it truly opened my eyes and introduced me to the world of fanficton so I have to say I truly wish you could be the happiest person in the world because you lit up my life when I was at my lowest when my girlfriend died, you truly are the one true God. praise the bacon tree and spread the chaos.😉 ps. wish for you to return