Reviews of What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
What?! The gamemaster and the top player are dating?! [BL]
cherlyswan
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If you are thinking about reading this book just go for it and see if it fits your taste. Since I'm the writer I'll just say that I personally love it, So worth your time. We are twenty chapters in and I've decided to shamelessly give myself a five star because I'm a fan of myself keke... The story deals with a lot of elements ranging from fantasy to mystery to cultivation and even a bit of horror. If you don't like the book you are free to curse the author all you like. Lol
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Dear author, First I want to thank you for this amaxing story and I hope you are always motivated to write stories. If your not then we your readers are here to motivate you. Hope yoi aren't pressured into writing ustj remember to enjoy it and feel the thrill whenever you write stories. Just want to say I appreciate this New concept of Gaming Novel especially because it's BL and this kind of stories are hard to make for writers and hard to find for us readers. Thank youand God Bless you😘😘😘 For the readers I won't say any spoilers except that it's good and I'd recommend it for everyone to read 😊Thank you😘😘😘
OMG! OMG! OMG! I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHHH! I'm a fan of this author and made a Webnovel account just to read this book. It's so greatttt!! I love the characters and the story. This is the most different BL novel I have ever read. It focuses on the story with every new level they play giving us new and amazing things. I can never guess what's going to happen next and it's mindblowing. Thank you author-nim!!! I hope Li Ling is the Gamemaster. I'll really cry if he's not T-T
Writing Quality: 2/5 Your writing style is good, there is nothing wrong with it, but the grammar makes everything drop. There are problems with missing commas, capitalization, wording, and punctuation. Also, this is my personal preference, but some paragraphs are too long and should be shortened. Updating Stability: 5/5 I give that to everyone because people have lives and not everyone can update daily. Plus, I never pay attention to this. Story Development: 3.5/5 (but I will have to put 4 on the thing). I like the way you tell your story; it's good, but some stuff seems too fast-paced while slow-paced at the same time. The flow would throw me off when the commentators would talk, because it does not give an indication when they start. But other than that, the plot development is not bad. Character Design: 4/5 I like your characters and they way they interact, especially the MC and his brother. Although, the interactions could come off as forced a few times, they are still interesting. You did a good job on developing your characters. World Background: 5/5 You gave a clear view of your background; very descriptive and clear. The changing of gaming settings/scenes are a bit of a flow disruptor, but it is unique and I like it. All in all, the main thing that needs to be improved on is grammar, especially in chapter one (the P.O.V in chapter one was confusing too). Other than that, you are on the right road. Keep up the good work, author!
Quite an interesting take on both gaming and transmigration genres! The book is an appropriate Length it doesn’t Keep you hanging with winded plot points but our secondary MCs apparently Have a sequel Based on them with a continuation to most of the unanswered plot twists! All fluff and nothing pg-13 romance wise fyi.
Wow! The synopsis itself was quite intriguing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. English isn't my language so I won't be a good judge still I wanna say that everything is written smoothly and is well understood with proper punctuation. Story itself has a different concept and unique plot👌 Keep up with the good work author wish you all the best❤️
I just finished and this was such a good book. it started off a little slow especially for me who doesn’t lean towards virtual reality type stories but the more I read the more I was pulled in. From the characters, to the world, to the plot, to the grammer, it was all top notch. Everything was ties together and written so well, if your hesitating to read this book just do it. At least read to chapter 40 and you’ll probably be hooked by then. A perfect mix of adventure, suspense, comedy, and romance. 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾 10/10 Wonderful ending too! Not Dissapointed at all.
I'll open with this: BL and Romance aren't exactly my cup of tea. This story, though? I may actually wind up reading it all the way through despite that, because it is very well put-together! The pacing doesn't leave a reader seeking more or less of any particular element, and while the grammar has some minor mistakes, it doesn't detract from the series of events the Author is building. All-in-all, I highly encourage giving this story a read, as it seem to have great things in its future. Keep up the good work, Author! <3
This Is The Best Story I’ve read so far omg im in love with the characters, the story, all the plots, even the cliffhangers have me going crazy 🤣Thank you so much for this wonderful piece of art ♥️♥️♥️ The fan service is amazing i keep fangirling all the time a cute Part comes and wanting to hit something everytime A-Zhi’s obliviousness hit home run 🤣🤣🤣 keep up the good work