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What!? My System Awaken after seeing My Teacher Panty!?

In the Planet Stoicheio, A world where Immortals ruled. And The strong devour the weak, and the weak cower before the strong. At age of 15-16 most people awakens their element inside their body and start cultivating, but those who awakens at age 15-16 are considered normal and can barely only reach Immortality with resources, only really those who awakens below 14 can really reach Immortality by good talent alone.... Some people don't even have elements and bear the reality of dying at old age. And People who don't have an element can never ever have an element, that's always been the reality, the rule that god created.... and you can never defy a god. And there's this guy name Kizu Sores who defy god and prove that reality is just a fantasy.... ... This happen when he ran outside of awakening hall after seeing he failed his sixth awakening meaning his already 16 so he can never be an Immortal...forget being an Immortal he can't even be a cultivator now....so he ran trying to vent his sadness.....he ran..... then he bumps into someone... the first thing he saw after coming back to reality is a pink panty..... and something sounds in his brain.... *ding* [Student-Teacher Lewd System HAVE BEEN AWAKENED] ... The cover photo is not mine, if you want to take it down, notify me.

Keith_Potato · Eastern
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!(From the Author)!

I will stopped this novel for now.

I'm sorry if I'm going to stopped what I started, but this is just a trial of writing a novel, as I am not a writer and I just decided to write this without much thought.

As I don't have experience in writing a story, writing pharagaraphs, dialogues and explaining are so bad.

And I never would've thought writing a novel is so hard, or maybe it's just for me. I will take this 6 chapters I made as an experience.

As I will say again I'm sorry, maybe if I have the mood again to write I will try to make a decent one, or rewrite this story or just continue.

You also can see my English is so bad, maybe I should try to improve my english first.

I'm sorry again and thank you for reading this! please give me a honest opinion about this novel in the comments or give some advice. You could also recommend what I should do if I ever made a new or continue this novel.