snowflake248
good story and character. author build story is good. just the way author jump to each character to the other character is to bit build story, (I'm a little confused). But over all is okeyyyyy. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Please keep updating. i love your story very much
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I love the characters and the plot development. The background of the whole story is very fulfilling. There are times when some parts feel like filler but they donβt feel overly concerning. I especially love how the developments in different of the story come together so fluently and smoothly. I realize the writing technique and the use of language can of course use some improvement but it doesnβt effect the reading experience in a negative way. So yeah! Expecting updates! ππ