Hateful_Fellow
Part of me is tired of the really long stories like this, but then a story like this comes along and just drags me in and I'm like... I WANT MORE! The grammar or translation (not sure which) isn't spectacular, sometimes whole words are missing, there are too many words, or complete misspelling, but it's not hard to understand what's going on. I do think there is too much information sometimes and I just wanna skip through things and condense it all down, this could use a good editor! Yet, other than there are too many chapters I also don't mind it and will skim through things that don't seem too important, so far, I haven't needed to go back to read what I skimmed, or outright skipped. I really like the Characters though and keep rooting for them even if we only see them for a short amount of time. The "world" is huge and there's lots of stuff Raven needs and wants to do, but sometimes a "side story" gets frustrating when I just wanna see more of other things. Yes, is bada****, yes he still has lots to learn, but really do we need to see so much of it? CONDENSE! I think I need to go ready some stories with only 1 or 3 books in their series, I'm tired of stories that seem to just drag on, even with "professionally published" books on like Amazon or whatnot. Then I can come back to this book and be ok again with it's length.
I gave this book a 5-star rating in all aspects. I don't care about other's opinions because I really love this! You might find the first few chapters with similarities to other stories, but I tell you, it's totally different. Read until the end. I assure you, you won't lose out. Thanks for writing such a good book author❤️.
Please just please go back to how it was before. This change of perspective is really damming. I loved how you were building up this story before. Just go back to the perspective you started with. This first person is really really ****ty. I only gave 2 stars for writing quality because you suddenly changed the way you were writing. I hope you get well soon and hope you start writing in 3rd person perspective again. Thank You.
My favorite novel! I lole how Raven behaves and also the personalities fo all the characters, they feel so real! The writing style is top notch and the fighting scenes are perfect! The best cultivation novel! I am sad that it has ended tho, but what a great ending we have 🔥 Hateful_Fellow, great work! This novel will forever be my favorite, its really what gets me addicted to webnovels🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️
I am a big fan of army/kingdom building novels. I would say that this novel is more aligned to be seen as a kingdom building novel. The world building is nice. Characters are really lovable. The choice of the author to not allow harem in this novel was real sad. But I had real fun reading this novel. The cultivation process is real neat. Very well thought of. This is a super interesting read and one you cannot miss out on, especially if you’re into High Fantasy and Kingdom Building novels.