Reviews of Warlock of War: My Ares System
Warlock of War: My Ares System
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Shameless Author Review here. So I think this is my best work in terms of grammar as I've already written two other books and learned from them. The beginning is a bit enraging so it might not be for some people. The MC isn't meant to be an all-powerful being, but a spider that pulls strings from behind to get what he wants (Though he still fights a lot). Also, I already said this in the first chapter, but this story does use historical events but is not completely historically accurate. These historical events do come later in the novel though, so don't expect them too early. Uhhhhhh... I think that's it. Anyway, please enjoy my novel!
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At chapter 70 and I have very mixed feelings about this novel. First off, it has a lot of potential and so far, it's pretty good tbh. As for why I have mixed feelings; pretty much entirely because of how the MC is portrayed.. It seems the author has fumbled slightly when making a manipulative MC. The MCs intelligence can only be considered above average while everyone else is just stupid. Second issue, the MC is very arrogant. I will say, I 100% am for an arrogant MC...but they MUST be charismatic and strong to back that up (example: Ren from TAPOV). Orien is just cocky and annoying at points. I will say, he is getting development, but he needs A LOT at this point to be a good MC. I will keep reading because, as I said, it has a lot of potential.
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This is actually a good story , MC was trying to be a scholar when he got drafted in the older time to fight against sparta he lost and is reincarnated later on to the world however now systems appeared and with them mana , I like it quite a lot was really good just a bit weird about how MC was son of strongest mage and was born with negative stats even if he's underfed he still ate a good amount after he was free and the stats stayed quite bad . Apart from that it's pretty good
This is a nice fix with a manipulative mc who isn't too detached and actually has friends. Decent use of the power system , however it could be described as a very loose slave system Spoiler bellow! . . . . . . . The whole fiasco with him not getting the midnight storm eyes was Pretty annoying and seemed out of place to ๐
