Reviews of WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
Keetarp
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very good ^^ ..........................................................................................................................................................
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not evil. just ruthless. mc love his girlfriend/love interest. don't wanna say more if I know this, I would have just dropped directly. but well, he is just a generic Chinese mc kill enemy, and love your friends is what I'll say in end. it might not be all true, but this is the feeling I get till the chp I read. so go for it, non evil likers ig.
👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 на счет качества текста хз т.к читал через переводчик, а так мне понравилось. В оригинальной истории лейлин был и правда чрезмерно жесток, а вот в фанфике его сделали менее жестоким что мне понравилось. И попадание в мир бога резни было неожиданно, но класно. Жду проды так держать автор.
I really like the Novel since i love Warlock Of The Magus World. I always wanted to read a fanfiction of it with a little cheat for Leylin which you did. The MC you created is not a cringy one so that's a good thing. Keep up the good work and i hope you don't dropped this because i believe your novel is a good one and has a lot of potential. Don't let people who don't like your work influence instead listen to those who like and people who give advice(criticism) to make your novel better.
Well , firstly I am a huge fan of WMW tooo ! Its really great that you are writing a fan-fic for it. Its understandable that the MC is more promiscuous since he has Shi Yan's ability from god of slaughter novel , so ignore those reviews blasting you for it afterall haters will hate . But during the later chapters (30-50) , The MC seems to have affections towards his maid , Bicky etc . Its almost as if he is going soft and you do not seem to like the idea of not happy endings for side characters . Might I remind you that MW is a dog eat dog world , where there is almost no place for affection . If the MC is as soft as you portray what is he going to do in the twilight .. arc ?(please don't drop it) also you should explain shi yan's ability properly , cause not all of the read GoS . Its really good for your first novel ,looking forward to it .please don't drop it
->I appreciate your effort for this story and hard work it’s good But ->I don’t like how Mc wasted effort as well so Many resources for useless weak subordinates -> it’s good to cultivate your own people but seriously one maid , that Femal magus And that worlock girl without any proper bloodline ->Instead he should focus on Talented people in all his subordinate their future path as well potential is not worth the effort Mc has taken as well how many time he has to change their path and all.... ->Otherwise Excellent please keep going
The first new dozen of chapter is really good. The new world he create is also good. The problem with that is he start it with 2 chapter of a somewhat info damp. Its good and all but that info damp is focus on something thats really unnecessary and something we dont care about. I stop reading till there and come back again after many months. I forgot what those 2 chap contain and im keeping up with the story. Lol so those chap are really just junk. Another problem is that author tend to overly explain/discribe something to the point he insert it in a middle of some thing that it destroyed the mood and vibes of it. The worst part is that explinatuon is a 3-5 paragraph thats really unnecessary or some thing he already explain. Theres also some chap thats 20% plot and 80% overly description or explinatuon of something. Its good and all if... ‘if’ the info your feeding is new, but no!! Its an old stuff that he already said a new chap back or last chap or even in the chapter thats hs it. He over did it even if its unnecessary and readers can just understood it with common sense. Theres also some paragraph thats has the same meaning but different wording. Not even a new info added and worst those paragraphs are long. Theres also one time where the author copy past a paragraph in 3 chapters. Like the story is good and all, but the explination/description? 🤢🤢 Old info thats recycle to make the chapter longer. Not to mention the side char. Author reintroduce a char again for 4-5 chap then use them one last time the throw them away. I mean why bother having a 4-5 chapter for those char when youll throw them a few chap later? For more chapters? Just make a mc’s interaction with his subject. It will make the side char alive and not just an object that will talk when you need them. Its not like this in your earlier chap. It become like this when you start your beast world arc. What happen? Is it because of p.a.t.r.e.o.n?? I think a good story bring more money than a long story. What a waste.
Warlock of the Magus world is a very good novel, that didn't have many negative points. There are only several ones. First is the neglected Clan Building element that was created when Leylin became Rank 5 Magus approximately, afterward it was a little bit talked about when he became Half-Step Rank 7, but that is all. The second thing that was neglected in the story was planar exploration and conquest. This one had great potential but wasn't developed properly, compared to another novel similar to WMW, Mechanical God Emperor, you could use more planar exploration and planar wars. The third thing that was forgotten was an exploration of the Underground World of the Magus World. Leylin told he would once explore it, but it never happened. Forth novel started to have a kingdom-building element but wasn't also written properly.
