Reviews of Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist
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Just one word: Villain. In this novel, the protagonist actually acts like one, using underhanded and despicable ways to achieve what he wants. I can only complain about one thing, which is that this novel doesn't have 1000 chapters lol. Highly recommend. ✌️
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Read up to chapter 20 and it’s good so far. Instead of other novels in this genre where the MC is a cringe ”alpha male” and the FLs are all mas*chists with room temperature IQ, MC pulls out his uno reverse card and despite not being a good person and being the villain in the setting makes himself out to be the hero and the hero to be the villain. It could still be done a bit better IMO by using a bit more subtlety and using his system and acting skills to make it out like he’s a misunderstood good guy. Certain scenes and development though do feel somewhat rushed at times, and almost everything that happens the MC directly tells to the FL which I think weakens things. Instead of coming across as a 200 IQ 3D chess player that convinces the FLs that he’s a good person and the protagonist is ‘evil’ while not appearing to be involved at all, it’s more like an ad*lt lying to a gullible kid and they believe it no questions asked. An example is instead of letting the FL “sneak behind the MC’s back” to ask if the protagonist got married to 3 other girls, the MC tells her to go and ask. In the future having the FLs “accidentally discover” things would improve the novel IMO. Things people “figure out” by themselves are always more believable to them. (Another example would be like if the MC gets injured protecting an FL somehow, instead of saying “look I got injured protecting you, I demand a kiss as compensation” or some other cringe line, MC ”tries to hide” his injury and the FL “discovers” it and realizes he cares about her enough to hide it so she doesn’t worry about him) Stuff like that where MC has a more behind the scenes role would make things funnier imo. Overall though the novel is quite good, and I think it’s a breath of fresh air from the nonsense I have to sift through on this platform on a daily basis. It reminds me of “Regressor instruction manual” with Light KiYoung a little bit if you’ve ever read that novel.
Great novel ... Finally a villain in a VILLAIN novel acting like a real villain..... Not some soft MCs.... This MC is cunning ... Even taking all heroines he uses evil methods...and then manipulate them 👍👍👍👍Suggestions: just need to give few 0P moments to heroines especially Su Xian she is the best girl plus main wife. ... She needs some smoke(actions). ... .Maybe few chaps for heroines POV ,how they r going with each other. Some of their conversations......A daughter of luck
The story is typical but better than most 'villain' novel. Still there are some cons - MC is a kind of sadist. He mostly uses rough ways to indulge in primal desires. I personally don't like it. Though he seems to care about two or three heroines but it still appears that he is just using them as a tool. What's the meaning of this if you don't even sincerely care about an individual? I'm not saying that he should become lovey dovey or like a righteous and kind protagonist but still make it look he cares about someone. It'll make story somewhat interesting. Though it's my personal opinion. I am not against the fact the MC forces himself upon some heroines or/and women but some women still deserve to be treated with gentleness. And just control his lecherous and lustful nature. Don't make him surprised everytime he looks at new heroine and at other things too.
One of the best I have read. The pace is moderate, and his personality his like a actual villian. I like how he slowly breaks the heroines🥵. Though i would suggest the system to given him some ability, like some mark appearing on the heroine's body, when they fully submit, could be a choker tattoo on neck, or in thier abdomen. And some kind of meter which can tell thier obedience and affection/hate.
