PancakesWitch
I read more than what was posted so i know a bit more than others This is a story about a vampire galactic emperor who dies and has to start over as a normal extremely untalented human child through the grace of his enemy you don't find a domineering ruler when you start the story but you will find a loser full of regrets he is not planning on repeating this time around you will also see as the stone cold vampire discovers humane emotions and how he had them all along but just hid them deep in his heart as he closed it from the world all while killing the minions of his enemy/benefactor who are aiming to kill everyone in his new world along the way he might even find love though it is unknown whether he will be able to handle all of them or not and not wanting to have the same regrets he is sure to spend time with his family in some lovely family moments trying to have some relaxed moments during his hectic life so overall expect an old soul trying to rediscover himself as his family helps him open up all while he is hunting and fighting for blood and power(mostly behind thier backs) with some occasional slice of life moments
Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.
things done well: world set up, the strength systems. things done less well: the characters feel a bit flat to me. things are "explained away" I find this book to be "too fantastic" too often to continue reading. there is no sense of any realism and while I'm not super far along (chapter 34) I don't find it engaging enough.