Reviews of Uzumaki Fire God

Great idea, but please, don't make MC young again, it will ruin the whole Idea and background story , and please don't give any other template as the name suggest Fire God and who better than Yamamoto, he on par or may way stronger than many Otsutsuki members with his bankai , make him the definition of ' Never underestimate a Old man in a profession where people die young '

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Fine, but I believe that a good chuck of this story was made by an ai. This wouldn’t be a problem imo if you even bothered to edit some of the text to fit the actual Naruto story.

The author re-read Chinese novels about young masters. All Naruto characters have been changed. Event mixed up.

Typical wuxia bs, with a psycho main character and no actual story

I was completely fine with events being AU but characters act so different that this isn't Naruto anymore, everything turned chinese except the names.

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Story premise is amazing... But the execution is horrible and not re a dable.

this is an incredible idea and thhas a lot of potential

This is kinda bad, mega rushed, just the old Mc that acts like an edgy xianxa mc murder hobbo , and everyone else « cowering in fear and awed by mc power ». Badly written of both Naruto’s and Bleach’s elements. It’s ok to speed run read it tho, but ye, kinda boring. The idea was good, sad that it’s so badly written.

I read through chapter seven, and I plan on continuing. I like it overall. It's not unique because most fics like to use Bleach powers in Naruto, but I believe it works based on the premise. I like the idea of the MC, and it makes it exciting to read. I'm usually neutral to systems and whether the world is following cannon or it's an AU. What I don't like is the style of writing choice. It's a wuxia cultivation novel in Naruto, which doesn't work out. You can descriptively tell by the attitude, dialogue, and terminology used for the characters. Grammar isn't the best-punctuation mistakes are numerous. Lastly, I dislike every character introduced so far. I'll give this a 3/5.

This is a solid start (11 chapters in) The quality so far is without fault, the characters seem alive and the story is interesting. I like the direction the story seems to be taking and the fact the main character is an old man is refreshing compared to the usual teen angst we tend get with Naruto FF. Keep it up.

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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.

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are the reviews on this novel paid for? or are standards just that low, i couldn't even make it through the first chapter.

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The story and grammar are pretty good but It’s wuxia esque for me

Although it has a chinese vibe and the writing quality is meh and author sometimes forgots to explain things the idea is good. If author manages to get an editor it would be even better.