Utilizing a mafia boss

It was a nice read. The plot is very interesting. I would suggest you to work on your Grammer and sentences though. It can make readers want to leave the story.

The first chapter was quite interesting and made me want to read the second one too. There are only 4 chapters but still the storyline was enough to captivate the readers attention. The characters are intriguing and makes me wonder what happened with all of them in their past.. Keep it up Author and good luck ^.^! [img=recommend]

A gripping to read althought the tenses were quite confusing. I enjoyed it. More ink yo your pen dear author❤️ I believe you're just starting out... so welcome to the world of authors!💥

Woah!!! Mafia... Everyone who loves to read novels about a cool mafia boss should read this. I love this so much. I read the both chaps. Other than there are some spelling mistakes, your work got my heart. Keep going author, upload more please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Good start to an intriguing story especially between the MC and his second in command. There are some grammatical and spelling errors that can be corrected to make the reading experience much more smooth. Keep up the good work, Author!

Its been less than a day the chapter has been released as of writing this, i really encourage the author to keep continuing this book, not only me but other people definitely have been intrigued by the first chapter alone. Well done, don't leave us hanging.

I typically shy away from stories in this genre but honestly from what I read it was really entertaining and had me hooked. If I had to give a critique I'd say the use of exclamation marks is a bit much. I'd say finding other ways to express the loudness or suddenness of a situation would be healthier for the story. Best of luck to you !

Not usually a fan of these kind of stories but you, sir, have my attention. I was hooked right from the get go. The plot is not only interesting but the twists are equally as entertaining. This is one of the better books on here.