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The story is promising. I like how the grit and brutality was maintained in the mafia setting, which is often softened and romanticized in gang-themed romance novels. The quality of the writing can still be polished, but the technique is already there. The plot also offers something exciting to look forward to. Keep writing!
READING STATUS: 5/5 I've read a lot of books on web, but I don't like every one of them. I usually read them for a few days and then put them down. However, your story was interesting enough to keep me reading all the way to the end. The book's cover was also captivating, and I'd like to recommend it to other readers because of it.🥰
It was interesting and it was also my first time seeing this kind of webnovel. I mean, I did read first POV webnovels before, but not webnovels stating whose POV is being done like this one. The chapters are also short. So, the story feels like it's moving fast, even though the pace is actually slow. Sadly, the chapters are still short.
I read to chapter 7. I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias. Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed. The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!! 🤗
Interesting story with a lot of potential! The shifting POV is a nice touch. There are a few grammar errors in each chapter... nothing that affects your understanding and its most likely due to typos imo. Author, you can try using something like Grammarly to get rid of minor errors like this, its really helpful. The ML seems to be really stone-hearted at the start, but I can see where his character is coming from. Best of luck author, I belive that you can take the story to greater heights.