ZeroNivrash
Ty for giving my novel a try. I will try to keep this short. After reading many novels, I have decided to write my own, so some things may feel nostalgic. However, despite my inexperience and the similarities this novel may have with others, I will try to keep things fresh and original. The protagonist is at the apex when it comes to Alchemy, also known as Pill Concocting. But even with his experience, he is not perfect and failed to create his perfect pill, which has cost him his life. The next time he awakes, he finds himself in the body of a silkpants in some backwater place in the Lower Realm. And this is where the story begins.
Omooo. More chapters pleaseπππππππ Can't wait to read more. π£π£ππ Hopefully you can post more chapters everyday for us to enjoy ourselves and we won't be stingy on our votes to you. This work of yours is so fascinating, wonderful to read. Etc. Haha If I can rate you 5 stars everyday, why not?? ππ
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I think this a good novel to continue on. Although it may be the similar concept as unrivalled god of alchemy itβs still undeniable has potential. I want to know if the author decides to continue this story if the male lead will Be so likeable and not some jerk who have so many suitors. He can be nice to all females yet should not go over the line and create harem. Wish to know how the story end. It was a great 11 chapters and wish there is more π
Cant wait...nice stories.......beautifull little girl ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
So far so good. Need more chapter. this novel has adapted many idea from various alchemist novel that I'm sure all of us have read. The only different noticeable now are MC's attitude (cool and godly) and his point of view (stay true to his previous lifetime behaviour). Keep up your good work. Don't give up writing.
As there's only 6 chapters out currently this will be negatively influencing the review FOR NOW. This is my opinion and personal preference only. The story starts out like many others, but not exactly like them, it's changed just enough for it to not be another boring cultivation novel generic start. My personal preference is that I don't get slapped with text walls of world background, or extensive family knowledge, that's quite unnecessary and can be pushed until later in the story. The author does this well as he gives just enough information to catch your attention but not overwhelm the reader. (Had to give 1* for lack of world background FOR NOW) Our main character wasn't an all powerful God-like being before his death, but a man who just wants to live eternally through his accumulation of alchemy knowledge. Which is great because he doesn't get everything he wants, and learns a lesson that not everything in life is attainable, even through hard work and dedication. The author does a great job at making a story well written even though English is not their native language. You may find grammatical errors here and there but they will in no way effect CURRENTLY getting the jist of the sorry. Overall I believe that this novel is a good read which has potential, it's not poorly written or pumped out with glaring errors just for something to be read. I can't wait to see more chapters and I have added this to my library.