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Oh god, this novel is truly a gem hidden under a ton of rocks. The author might need an editor as there are few grammatical and spelling mistakes but worry not as they are miniscule enough to be ignored for now. But the story and the background is written so well that I am writing a review for any novel after so long :P

what a shame this was tarnished by the harem..... really a shame.😐😐😐😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

A wonderfully written ff. I remember not loving the main character when I read the original of this story, but I loved his universe. That's why I wanted to thank you, I hope it lasts for a long time.

It's very good fanfic this is what I am looking for not similar to other WOMW fanfic were they become leylin....,.........................,.....

meh everything good till now,,,but heck where is author why he's not updating story,,,I like this novel specially for magus world ...where mc is progressing step by step,,,,but I think author drop it

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You couldn't find good fanfic for this novel. Good start .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................

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I like so much. Update please.....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]