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Reviews of Unlimited Borrowing System

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Unlimited Borrowing System

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zushe_sensei
zushe_senseiLv2zushe_sensei

The detailing about characters, background and of course the genesis 😂 is amazing it really makes you to read more unlike other system novels it doesn't follows the clichĂ©s and interesting quests keep popping. good job author

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Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1Easy_Tiger

This is an extremely high quality story with great set up, interesting world and an intriguing system that I very much look forward to seeing utilized in later installments. The book opens right in the thick of the action as the protagonist is beaten up by a group gangsters and told he owes them 50k to pay back his dead father's debt. This works well to throw the protagonist into adversity right from the start as he struggles to come up with a realistic way of obtaining the money. From there, a chance discovery leads to him entering an original system world where he can exchange an item of his own possession for something he can borrow for a limited time. It's an interesting set up and I look forward to seeing how he plans on using this ability to work back his father's debt. All the right elements are in place to make this a fantastic read. I look forward to reading more.

Crystillia
CrystilliaLv1Crystillia

Awesome. I like how you portray the main charachter, and the mystery of the Bossman. The name itself presents an intresting idea, and I am definitely wondering where this can go. Potential is high.

BigMarch
BigMarchLv13BigMarch

The book is very well written. I love the plot, it is very interesting and it makes people want to binge-read it at one go. continue to work hard author.

Acylith
AcylithLv1Acylith

Interesting! I was never exposed to novels with the concept of ‘system’ so this was a great introduction. This story has potential and I’m intrigued to find out what happens next. Good job, author!

silent_walker
silent_walkerLv3silent_walker

A high paced system novel... The writings are easy... not much vanity there. Readers can hook in immediate with the clear writings. The character tones is better than I expected. I only read about 3 chapters so can't tell about the story development. But the system looks promising. Now the problems I see in the readings... - you missed a lot of punctuations. t there's apparently no comma or periods in the quotations. fixed it as soon as possible. -the story missed a bit of the depth in the beginning. readers would judge the story reading the very first chapter if they will continue or not. pay attentions to that. -descriptions. work on that. - pay attention to the little details... overall the book looks promising with a unique system... good luck

DonDenis
DonDenisLv2DonDenis

wow brilliant story so far, with some interesting characters in the few chapters read so far, plot is brilliantly complex and interesting at the same time. Hope your story does well author.

QueenRani6
QueenRani6Lv3QueenRani6

Why? Why? Why? Why am I addicted,?!! It's not fair, author that you have to make your book this great. Okay , not exaggerating though! The book is really nice and it has a fresh idea. Not a fan of sci-fi genre but I just got to read yours!

Currer
CurrerLv3Currer

Wow, this is amazing! I was really expecting a typical system genre book, but this blew me away. The author's writing is easy to read. Pacing is perfect and characterization is great. The end of each chapter leaves me wanting more. Would recommend to anyone (:

Joymheks
JoymheksLv1Joymheks

This is an interesting read, and it got me hooked. You are very good with dialogues, and I like how the story progressed. I'd like to read more of this, and I hope you update soon.

sami_sami_9684
sami_sami_9684Lv1sami_sami_9684

Wang wei character is really interesting and amazing. Love the story and the twists. Author your writing skills are really amazing.....Best of luck.

Juliet_Omuadona
Juliet_OmuadonaLv4Juliet_Omuadona

This story is intriguing. From the very first chapter it captured my interest. I actually just wanted to read the first chapter but suddenly I got curious and before I knew it I have read more chapters.

Edel_Li
Edel_LiLv2Edel_Li

Well, indeed, 15 days is short, but you know, better this than... ;) World seems interesting, the beginning goes straight to the point and you do wonder how things will go for the Wang brothers. Keep going, author!

kenshilove
kenshiloveLv1kenshilove

The first chapter makes me amazingđŸ€. I'm willing to support this author. You don't have a problem reading this because there are no grammatical errors? For me, but I enjoyed reading this.

Rak_VK
Rak_VKLv1Rak_VK

I was really into reading this book, which is amazing, because the game basis stories rarely capture my interest. However the characters and pacing of the story are really good! There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but they don't hinder the reading experience at all. Definitely give it a read!

Madym
MadymLv2Madym

Good Work! So another light novel, I used to read them a few years ago so well it did brought some memories. And I can say like most of them I also liked it no doubt. Anyway, about the writing quality, it is not bad. Good infact. The story development is going smoothly and about the world background, very good, just very good. You have really done a great job and I wish you will continue bringing updates.

PGODofficial
PGODofficialLv2PGODofficial

This world is a truly exciting and immersive one - with so much more potential to be explored! The story is definitely going places. Can't wait to follow along!

Blissa
BlissaLv2Blissa

This is an excellent book! The way you design your characters is excellent! Give yourself a pat in the back, again, this is so good! Good job author! Have a good day!

Khawla_Amini
Khawla_AminiLv2Khawla_Amini

The genre is not my type at all, yet I found myself crawling over each and every line... I'm totally in love with the way you use words and create magnificent breathtaking lines. You are indeed a successful project for a future author\ writer, and I'd love to be among your fans - The book is already in my library, can't wait for more.

Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4Maryixxx

I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.