My imagination opened up while reading this light novel , readers give this book support , this is a immersive one with a lot of potential. I like the chapters so far as I read. The English is good and easy to understand.[img=recommend]
This story is fascinating and decent............................................................... it is the type of book you find difficult to put down once you've picked it up and i am rooting for wei to overcome his troubles ............................................................. so far, this is excellent. good job author ............................................................................................................................. .................................................................................................................
I read the first few chapters and all I can say is that this book is my go to! I can easily say that this story has potential and I'd like to read further! I find the characters interesting and am curious about what holds for them in the future! Other then that, i find your story unique and really quite something! Keep on writing!
I liked the title, the synopsis, and even the first few chapters of the story. It's a cool concept where a person had this power "Borrowing system". I like the problem presented in thie first chapters, and it was really a nice read. The only thing I would like to point out the word "said" and "asked" used in the novel. It might be worth a try to change that into something more unique and engaging for the dialogues.
So far the story plot is captivating with interesting dialogues to keep you glued. This book has potential and I highly recommend it. I like that the personalities of the brothers are relatable and their dialogues never feels boring. You did great, author. Good job! [img=recommend]
Yeah! A nice and promising light novel with a funny and interesting premise! Really, author, I liked your synopsis (but the cover could get more color to suit the novel's mood). It showed a sense of humor I crave in this type of novel. Also, the Wang brothers are funny and relatable! But, What I liked the most was the subtle humor in many parts, and how well you avoid unnecessary descriptions to deliver your plot! Good luck, kudos! Added to the library!
Man! Salute to you! Everybody can't write this genre in a realistic way! Seems like it would be a fantastic story! Keep it up! I cheer you!
So it's seems like a good story so far the writing is inmersive, and yes, it feels like a freaking movie, so... would I recomend it? Yes Of course ABSOLUTELY!
An intriguing system genre and the prologue is intriguing too, I read no errors from the author's writing. I can sense that the author really did a great job by polishing the chapters. Readers would be hooked just by reading the prologue. Give this a read!
Very interesting storyline! I enjoy how this story developed. The conversations are also interesting and refreshing. But maybe you can use some punctuation marks like period and coma at the end of the conversations before the quotations marks [img=recommend]