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Universal Power System

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Not_For_Me
Not_For_MeLv1Not_For_Me

Bro listen this was one heck of an adventure for me cuz first of all I'm not interested in these kind of novels but my friend insisted and boy was shocked like what an amazing story so far, you really represented the Webnovels writers potential with your work, keep up the gud work.#UPS gang❤️

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PandaDumpling
PandaDumplingLv3PandaDumpling

Very interesting first chapter. It vicidly gives the readers info about the world background as well as the power system that will be in play. Moreover, it also adds a bit of realism to this fantasy world given how humans had made certain decisions out of greed and whatnot. Overall, incredible start. Good luck, author.

Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

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Jay_Corbitt_0777
Jay_Corbitt_0777Lv14Jay_Corbitt_0777

he lives in a technological advanced world and doesn't know how stats work........... he put his first 2 stats into perception which he didn't. eed at all at the moment and nit strength....... why? seriously why? He has been beaten to the point of near death for years and could barley finish the exercises and he was just like oh well I'll just put these 2 points Into the Stat I don't understand, even though I literally just ready a very clear straight forward description, and not into the one thing I need right now........

Eddicted
EddictedLv5Eddicted

I was expecting a realistic story after reading the 1st chapter but by 7th chapter i realized that this will be just another pipedream novel about world peace and a hero raised out of tragedy (quite appealing to ignorant masses). The deceased grand mother character made sure that the MC will be person who is happy to have people walk all over him with an assuring attitude that he wont take any revenge even when he becomes powerful in the future. I guess these kind of MC's appeal to the hidden masochistic side of whimps.

AWESOME_01
AWESOME_01Lv4AWESOME_01

Another story with a Main Character with Hero Complex who lets people walk all over him. I don't think i need to add anything else to it. Veterans will understand what this means.

Jarvis3000
Jarvis3000Lv11Jarvis3000

At first, I thought this was just a copy of The bloodline system and my vampire system. But no, even though at the start they might seem similar, as the story progresses it becomes better. I just read 25 chapters and already am in love with it. Hope that you publish more chapters

LostMz
LostMzLv3LostMz

The writing was captivating, The characters were believable and I cared about them,The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down and I look forward to witness a more upstanding story.

Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13Deadly_Healer

well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows

Harthik_Reddy_2512
Harthik_Reddy_2512Lv2Harthik_Reddy_2512

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FunniestGuy
FunniestGuyLv1FunniestGuy

Amazing story and world building, established many things very quickly but not rushing things, amazing story and I recommend reading it. KEEP WRITING, MY BESTO FRIENDO!

VoIkmer
VoIkmerLv4VoIkmer

Well to be honest i saw a lot of potential on ur history but i don't like the type of mc that i've saw. Hi tries to be some kinda of Captain America like but this is not the type that i like. So to summarize the author either is sadic or want to run totally from any sign of a edgy mc. To be rlly honest everything i liked except the mc just not my cup of tea.

Zavia_6318
Zavia_6318Lv4Zavia_6318

everything about the novel is great except I don't see a lot of romance doesn't he have charm there are plenty of novels out there but people lose interest when finding out there's no female characters interested in the protagonist

Morgan_Griffin_8445
Morgan_Griffin_8445Lv3Morgan_Griffin_8445

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DJ_Anthony
DJ_AnthonyLv1DJ_Anthony

Interesting plotline and a decent start but your upload schedule needs some work.

ProvincialDAO
ProvincialDAOLv13ProvincialDAO

if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.

Daoist5FLz1G
Daoist5FLz1GLv1Daoist5FLz1G

! It's a captivating magic novel that explores a world where magic is harnessed through a unique and interconnected power system. The story follows a group of young wizards as they navigate the intricacies of this magical world, uncovering ancient secrets and facing thrilling challenges along the way. The author does a fantastic job of describing the magic system and its rules, making it feel immersive and believable. The characters are well-developed, and their journeys are filled with excitement, mystery, and personal growth. Overall, it's a must-read for any magic and fantasy lover! 📚✨

DaoistYlM4IZ
DaoistYlM4IZLv1DaoistYlM4IZ

Good start and it feels well thought out but the upload schedule needs work.

Zeton
ZetonLv2Zeton

This thing has a lot of potential brother! I can definitely see that this novel is gonna be a super hit. Keep working and keep grinding. The start of the story is amzing too, can’t wait to see what will happen next. I am expecting there are gonna be planetary wars etc. May Allah help you in your work.

Chad_dude
Chad_dudeLv1Chad_dude

Amazing book my guy it got me pretty hooked up that I literally read in a full rush and read over chp 50 In a whole book. The Character building is amazing with the slight humour makes it so worth my time.Looking forward to see this book become a famous hit. I'm countin on ya.