The_Valentin3
One of the better-written stories I've come across so far. It's a low bar to clear, but the sentence structure, grammar, pacing, imagery, and characterization are excellently done- I hope I get to see more of the world and meet more alien species as the story continues, since this writer does have a flair for some interesting humanoid builds.
This is a great story so far. The author has built the main characters well and introduced the plot with ease. The synopsis is great, drawing readers into the story. The only fault I have found is with slow updates but as a fellow writer I understand that there are things that can get in the way. This story is one of my favorites at the moment and I'm excited to keep reading.