Roosemary
This fanfic is amazing ... The quality of writing, that's so so, a lot of mistakes but the writer says English is not his native language, so I understand, because English isn't my native too. The stability of the update is good, especially since the chapter is quite long. The development of the Story is very good, I can see it in the early chapters. The plot speed is very good. Character design, no doubt, although the author uses a lot of reference Fate Series, but his OC is a excellent character so far. Background of the world, the author can take advantage of the vast world of Overlord and all the systems in it, the explanation is also in detail and the development of the world in this fanfic is very good. Overall, an amazing Fanfic.