Hello, Author here. Actually I don't want to write anything in the review column. However, I am forced to remind you, people who only want women, harem, lemons, sex, and so on. Sorry, this fanfic is not for you. I only warn you, that the main focus of this novel is the development of Camelot and its impact on the world of Overlord itself. Many people protested, why didn't I pair Esmeralda with Nash? it's because I don't want to, it's simple. Thank you for your attenttion.
Well its a good story. passable character development. A bit cliché world building but its ok. So why the review is only three stars?? Well its looks like the author has some cocking fetish. I mean seriously dude wtf. You do all this details sh*t by giving almost a perfect reason to the two Ocs to come together just to ruins it by putting the male oc with somebody else. Disappointing just disappointing.
Pretty good grammar what you would expect of an 8 year old. Overall excellent OCs and beginning can not wait fore more.
I thought the fanfic standard on this site was beyond help, but I found this excellent work. I really enjoyed reading this amazing work. This fanfic is underrated. Please don't drop this fanfic.
Overall good story for a fanfic. The translation is just ok, maybe u can try get an editor to review the grammar. Also the idea itself was great, u can get some highlights about Camelot and its Round Tables.
This fanfic is so dope Keep it up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A good read. I hope you don't drop
From what I saw so far it's good, the characters seem to have a good background despite being not deep described (after all it's an overlord fanfic, backgrounds don't matter) the characters seem to be well written, maybe it's early for a review but so far so good
Author if you aren’t good at english you could write the story, copy the text and paste it a gramma checker or let chatgpt fix the grammatical errors.
masterpiece but I think it's dropped,idk it was pretty good wonder why it's dropped .......................... .......................... ..........................
This novel is total trash! The MC is a total simp and does whatever the queen tells him to do and he's super stupid! Also not that I would like it but why is the MC the MC in the first place? Why not the queen,would have made a lot more since but whatever. Would not recommend.
I really like this story and I find it really good if the author keeps this quality up then it can become one of my favorite though I can't say that now because it doesn't have enough chapters to put it in my favorites
Is this log horizon fanfic or overlord? It looks like this is boring to read. Is this log horizon fanfic or overlord? It looks like this is boring to read.
Ia this from Royal Road??? Nice ☺️ Moar Moar Moar Moar Moar Moar Moar Moar, Pls don't drop Pls don't drop Pls don't drop Pls don't drop Pls don't drop Pls don't drop
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superb writing, really catches your attention . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .
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Simply Amazing, pls don't drop this fanfic. Its hard to find a decent fanfic in this site. I need more chapter. __________________________________________________________
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