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Transmigrated Mind

Author: Praefactuss
Fantasy
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What is Transmigrated Mind

Read ‘Transmigrated Mind’ Online for Free, written by the author Praefactuss, This book is a Fantasy Novel, covering ACTION Fiction, ADVENTURE Light Novel, SYSTEM Internet Novel, and the synopsis is: Here I am again, stuck in the darkness of my own room. Surrounded by thoughts that has been plaguing my mind since the d...

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Here I am again, stuck in the darkness of my own room. Surrounded by thoughts that has been plaguing my mind since the day I've decided to drop out of college. Yes, that's me. John Colton. A 28 year old college dropout now leeching off his parents, refusing to make a living on his own. But no, this isn't a story about how useless of a son I am. No... This is the story of the time where I got lost in my mind and got transported to another world. A world where magic and mythical beings exist.

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US_DreamerDon
US_DreamerDonLv14US_DreamerDon

Okay, I really like this story. Not many transmigration stories evolve around parents who literally kick out their own son. Although I like it, I believe that this story suffers from bunching paragraphs together and telling us through dialogue. Example of this can be found in the second paragraph in the first chapter. Instead of having the Protag ask why his head hurts, why not have him feel it and pull his hand away from the pain? Also, why not write 'trying to get his barrings, he felt around and ultimately found... a brick wall?' I think what would help the author out in this is the advice of "Let us see through his eyes." I can't wait to see what's in store for our Honourable John Colton, the favorable and loved shut-in.

Garvita_Kushwaha
Garvita_KushwahaLv1Garvita_Kushwaha

It's really great!! I just started reading so I can't tell about the whole, but the starting is really good and interesting. I look forward to reading more chapters. Keep it up author! :D

SPBasilio
SPBasilioLv12SPBasilio

I have read the first few chapters and all I can say is that it's pretty interesting and that the grammar is already pretty good[img=recommend]

rzasrsna
rzasrsnaLv2rzasrsna

The book is Interesting! i love this kind of genre. I'm not done reading it but for sure I'm going to love this novel! I also added it on my library. keep it up!

Flamefalco
FlamefalcoLv3Flamefalco

I love this book! Although The paragraph needs to be seperate So i have easier to Follow and knowing who’s in the conversation. But overall I love your work. Please keep it up I cant wait what happens soon!!

Omahakhan
OmahakhanLv1Omahakhan

I think the mc accepted the fact that he was teleported into a completely different world rather quickly . Other then that I like the flow of the story.

Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseLv4Bird_Of_Paradise

I love the plot and flow of story. Personally I love fanatsy and transmigration kinda works so why not add this to your library as well😉😉..I mean its good but if the writer does great it will be even better😌😌Hoping to see that improvement😌😌

Yvette_Celia
Yvette_CeliaLv10Yvette_Celia

Hey, i like the story. You write it well, so it's easy for me to give you 5 star. Keep on writing cause this story will be great if continued.

Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv1Andry_Reyes

This a good read! I recommend having shorter paragraphs to make it easier to read, but other than that, it's definitely worth a read.

inflict
inflictLv4inflict

Hmmn, i can foresee world building in the plot, may the author succeed in giving us a substantial world. It's immersive and the flow is great! Keep it up![img=recommend]

GCarre
GCarreLv11GCarre

Beautifully written with an intriguing plot and well-made system. With the right pacing to intrigued every reader for the next development. I can't wait to read more chapters ❤

TitanMaster
TitanMasterLv1TitanMaster

This is definitely an interesting read. Some of the events are a little more sudden than I was expecting, and the paragraphs could be shortened a bit to help with reading, but overall, it has a decent flow.

draco_666
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The first chapter is so funny btw this novel is good tho don't know if the author will update sooner or later but i love reading this hahahha

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