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Starting is a bit confusing as the author confessed but it became understandable after couple of chapters. One request delete the confession as it makes it more confusing or add another confession

Good story, I like it; it was a bit confusing at first but with each chapter it became easier to understand where the story is heading. Good writing quality and great story and character design. Great work author.

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The character design and places were good and your writing skills were good as well so i rated you 5. All in all your work is very good and it caugths interest to readers,and most your story is unique. Definitely added this to my lib.😉 keep up writing

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The truth is that, at the beginning, the story is a bit confusing with all that going back and for in time and it's not really well explained why and how it happens. However, as you read, the story starts to get some sense. It really has potential and I promise I'll read the story until the mystery is resolved.

OK, first of all, this novel didn't give me the feeling a 'light novel' would give, but it gave me the feeling an actual novel would give. I'm sure you'll understand what that means. As for the story, you'll have to bear with the first chapters to get familiarized with the circumstances the main characters are in and then some chapters later, you'll be really engaged by their relationships and their crossed love targets. Added to my library, hoping to find out how their relationships will develop.

Honestly, the story is confusingly worded and there are mistakes in grammar here and there. But, the story is different from a normal Japanese school life with the addition of the protagonist being well, different. The character interactions are interesting though.

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This novel is a bit confusing in the beginning. I was not sure what was going on and how to link the name to what was happening. However, reading more chapters, the story begins to develop and the plot and story line is more clear. Characters seem fun..Looks good to me. Give it a read!

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Meses atrás passei por esta obra e não li, mas agora... acho que "devo" ler, pois preciso entender melhor as pessoas... e nada melhor para me ensinar que uma obra que tem foco não somente em um personagem, mas vários.

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Not the type of genre I prefer. However, this is different and of greater quality. Just hoping that you'd make the chapters a bit bigger. The grammar is alright. And the idea itself is good. Kudos!

Loved the book, the world development is great and the plot is amazing. The story line is amazing. Its a great read and a captivating story.