I will be shameful here and give my novel a 5 stars. You have read my previous novels, then you will know that I am trying to write a showbiz novel for a long time and this was the piece I ultimately wrote with my current skill. It will be a long journey and the MC will slowly reach the top. The novel would have elements from other showbiz novels like Top management and God of music but I will keep the plot as original as I can. The start of this story is actually from a novel i had read a long time ago and then, the setting would change as soon as he enters a agency. There would many new characters and some potential love interest but I will go with a Yandere for the main heroine. If you have any thoughts about this novel and how can I make it more good, do tell me in the comments and please review this novel.
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First of all, the rating of this novel is mega faked. Out of the 236 current reviews, about 100 of them are fake 5 star spam. I'm not sure whether the author deletes lower revs, but well, if the post is gone then... The grammar was pretty bad. The story was also basic and simple. Most of all, the author kept stealing plotlines from God of Music and Top Management, without even bothering to change nothing other than the name. If it was once, okay then... but it keeps happening, and with the story already average enough as it is, it makes it hard to keep reading. Literally, basically all of his ideas were directly copied off the novels. Also, I think he claimed there was an editor... but it didnt feel like it at all... It feels like the novel has a lot of cliche and plot armor too... Not as bad as most fan fic, but... It might not be that bad if you are a new reader, and your English isnt the best, however if u read blot of online novels already, then... The characters felt like ones u see in most harems, 2d.., Overall, the only advantage of the novel was the update speed. I really wanted to keep reading, as there is barely any celeb novels and I like them, I really tried... but it kept making me want to turn off my phone... sorry... Plus... I especially dont like pirates...
Chapter 1-28 is strangely familiar it's like two korean novels that i have read from chapter 14-28 is like the scene of the novel TOP MANAGEMENT where the mc was developing his second actor which this scene is just like that chapter 1-13 is just like the other korean novel which i forgot whats the title but the gist of it is that a 30 years old mediocre actor put up his effort and gain stardom his manager is also called bear and strangely their personality is the same and how they communicate and their scenes is also the same ummm author?? Wtf??
Droped at chapter 12. The reason is that characters are too simple and well more like dolls than humans. There are some very odd small mistakes like how can actors own clouthings get dirty when he is acting for a movie. Time is also sciwed dont get it if there was only 1 day gone or months as at one point all his cenes are done but at another point he goes home and hey mum I got that move part o.O. Abou spelling well past, present and future is a mess but spelling it self is ok. So I dont get it how so many give 5 stars. I do think that some may like it but 5 stars is clearly overkill.
I only read the first 6 chapters there are several parts that repeat the same thing several times without getting to the point. It seem like explained were dragged out to make longer chapters. I don't think I can read further but the idea of this story is great. The story really needs an editor as well.
Looks, I will admit that this novel is entertaining and despite so many frustrating moments, I actually enjoy reading this. BUT! Here the but, is that this is novel is barely original. I just read this until 60 chapter, and maybe it will get better and more original. But damn man, at this point I can count two novel with the same plot and the same character in this novel. The first novel is Beautiful Top Star and the second is Top Management. I meant, I get it if it was only as inspiration, but all the chapters that I read so far mostly looks like cut, paste and edited. Tbh, if it was adaptation from only Beautiful Top Star I am probably okay reading this. But then came the plot that looks almost the same as Top Management and bruh this really starting to looks like plagiarism. Not only that but the grammar and typo also more abundant in here. But I don't mind it because I was just finishing reading some MTL novel and my mind still in mtl mode, so it was mostly okay
The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion. There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers. The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive. I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better. Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
⛔⚠️Attention⚠️⛔ Author never finish his novel. He always drops them midway. Author is a scam. Authors Recipe: 1. Find good & popular korean novel 2. Copy korean novel plots & ideas but add a little bit of your own original ideas 3. Continue getting plots & ideas from other novels 4. When running out of ideas to copy drop the novel midway
The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well. Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them. World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters. Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far. Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always. Written at Chapter 21