Awesome read! I read the first ten chapters so far, and I can say that the story is action-packed, there’s no shortage of humorous one-liners, and it has a rather spicy if ruthless femme fatale as its protagonist. Despite the abundance of blazing guns, giant mutated angler fish and heavily weaponized strippers, the chapters have a surprising amount of depth to them; courtesy of the many references to both contemporary pop culture and ancient Greek mythology. The same depth can be attributed to the lore of the story-world, although much of it remains implied throughout the story’s background and the actions of its characters. The book is obviously still work in progress, but if you can look past the occasional typo or grammar error, I’d say the story so far is definitely worth the read.
Simply put - brilliant. I was skeptical at first, as I haven't really read much webnovel stuff before. The world building and character designing is absolutely brilliant! I also love the story. The characters are unique and have their own things, makes me so immersed into the book. The writing could be better - I mean that as there's quite noticeable amount of typos. That's my only gripe, though. I'm still giving 5 stars in writing quality as the wording and sentence building is beautiful. From what I've seen, the Author seems to be extremely keen on their work! Chapters come at a good pace and at top notch quality. Every time I get a notification for a new chapters I'm already there!
I am in love with Athena; I want to just pull her out of the book and call her my wife. Neil is also a fascinating character and I love their non-romantic interactions. The world setting is better than most sci-fi movies and novels I've read, I love it! This novel is a sci-fi treasure and I really hope more people get to enjoy it soon. The plot runs smoothly and the action scenes are vivid enough that I can see it play out as a movie in my head as I read. Would love some character art in chapter comments. Overall, I look forward to seeing more updates, meanwhile, I'll be checking out your other book.
The action begins with the very first chapter. 🦋 The female lead doesn’t seem to be emotional at all… Some chapters were perfectly described, but I was reading it with a poker face on… It was well described of what they were doing, not too detailed, and letting us to imagine it for ourselves, yet some parts lacked emotions and some dialogues were too long. I don’t wanna give necessary reference of what this novel reminds me of, but it does a perfect job by standing out. 👏🏻 Work on describing your character’s emotions a little bit more, and don’t rush your story, it seems promising. 🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋