Reviews of Time Emperor (Champion)
Time Emperor (Champion)
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even if your main language is not Spanish or you don't like the google translator, I advise you not to miss such a good novel ..................................................................................
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Una gran historia, los personajes son muy variados y es una lectura muy agradable, como una especie de sino**is para quien lo lea un MC que reencarna en el mundo Naruto como campeón de una diosa y viaja a otros mundos, conoce a chicas y crea un harem, varias situaciones de acción y crecimiento del personaje
..... ....... ........ That's is last time that I tried this novel. And my God. That's escalate pretty hard. I want to comment just how good author at making nonsense. He is a Pro. With a big letter. He could create the most ridiculous and weird excuses and make them work. So for sure, he's imagination is a strongest part of this novel. And somehow... He only use it to buff enemies of mc, nerf mc so he whould struggle every battle like a little loser and to make a whole lot of pointless drama. Honestly, second volume was already pretty bad. Yuki was useless most of the time and in the end, he do a lot of nonsense to make... Another useless stuff. But 3 volume is like shounen on steroids. Author just buffed all enemies, make more problems for mc and make another drama - where do I hear it? Oh, right. It's exactly the same as a first volume. And somehow he make a big brain move and claims that this is different because in first volume Yuki was nerfed. And in 3 everyone was buffed - did you heard about commutative property? The result is still same.
I would agree with that top review that this story is so good that google translate wouldn't hurdle you much to read it. This story is so worth reading it even on google translate .. ... This story would surely be in top 10 ffs if it was in English .. .do give it a read once guys. .. Keep it up author and you got some nice update schedule of the chapters
Reading through Google translation. Look I very much like you work, men. I like you choice of females in a group and how you portrait them. I was liking how the story go. I even could praise for how good you could bs and make story longer. (I mean, whole guilty crown world isn't actually that big, but you make the most of it). But come on, man. Stop drugging arc and character relationship with bs logic. You deliberately nerf mc, so that you could give much more drama and write longer chapters. Than come useless shames in the end arc, for epic countdown of guilty crown world... Was this really necessary? Logically speaking -no. But as a writer who need to cram more chapters - of course, very important mind games of mc, is exactly what readers wanted, eh. I still like this work and that is good work for sure, but **** you. Like really **** you.
Se necesita tanto para cambiar la personalidad del MC Huhh. Y demasiados herems en el mundo en el viaje del MC harán que el MC sea un idiota y la historia tan desagradable y desarrollará más la construcción del personaje. A pesar de que es tan fuerte en el futuro, ¿cuál es el punto si es ingenuo y estúpido?
For those who cant read spanish, I recommend using google web translate. Trust me, this fanfic is worth the effort. Even if its google translated, its is still very much readable comapred to mtl. So far, the only obvious grammar mistake is that 'he' or 'she' isnt used properly however aside from that it is still easy to read and sometimes better than some other fanfic written in english. If this was written in english, I have no doubt that this will soar in the rankings. So give this a try you will defintely not regret it.
the character design of this novel sucks, but the novel itself is good, it has a great plot and an interesting world development except for the characters and their development is fine. I don't know if no one noticed it, I'm the only one or everyone noticed but decided not to mention it, all the women in the main character are between 16 and 18 years old and fall in love - they have ***, with a 12-year-old boy ... maybe they are all shotakons?
