There Were Two Brothers

wow! what a plot ! currently hooked to it! Best of luck to the author ! everything is well described and detailed correctly .every prose and cons!

I always loved war settings. I can tell the story is one of a kind to me because I've never bumped into such a unique plot and world building. The writing is good but it's a little confused me to read the first chapters because of much heavy information and i have to get used to the characters' names and did some scroll down. Overall, it's an appealing story and worth your time 👍

The story captured me from the very first chapters, beautiful plot, and world-building. The characters are interesting and everything is very well written.

I like the way the author build the world and the plot !!! I will definitely read more! The characters are unique and easily distinguishable, so its easy to follow who was talking and doing while having a conversation.

Excellent plot and storytelling that makes me want to know more. The author did an excellent job making every sentence beautiful enough to let the reader feel hooked on the story. Keep up the good work!

The reading journey was really enticing with twists and turns every corner! I had fun and didn't even realize how time had flown. It's a really interesting plot[img=recommend]

It's an interesting story. The writing is quite detailed, which is not exactly my cup of tea, but it gives you a very clear picture of the scene. The prologue also has a lot of information to take in, which is great for a fantasy novel, as it helps you understand the setting pretty early. And the story is already completed so anyone decided to start reading it can binge-read it in one go Recommended 👍

I usually, read very long or descriptive novels, which satisfies a reader's thirst for content. And to be honest, I like to be in that 'fantasy' world. And here, I was oddly satisfied. It was short, and directly started at a point. But I quickly thought myself as Intervar and going through that awkward dinner and various things that followed. Author's narration keeps us hooked. It could've started in the middle of a action scene and I still would've been able to go with it! Please keep writing!

The synopsis is pretty interesting and the same goes for the beginning. The world is well-described. I have read about three chapters yet, and I look forward to read the full story. The MC is pretty interesting.

4 chapters in and Intervar's character seems interesting. Great story with a lot of potential. The world building is certainly different from what I usually read and it's surprisingly refreshing.

It's nice to find a well-written fantasy story with this premise. Intervar is an interesting character, and not one that I would think at first to be a protagonist, but it works. Twelve chapters in and it's a story with much potential. The spelling and grammar are intact, and the writing crisp per line. This will be one that I follow.

Good starting of the story. The information that readers get from world building can be understood while the characters relationship and struggles is interesting.

I'm writing a review until Chapter 6, so maybe there would be changes in the later chapters. The writing is neat and the author doesn't just info-dumping in the first chapter. The sentence structures and descriptive sentences are good aside from the mixture of the present and past tenses. All the best, author! While the writing is generally good, I hope to see more details about the world and the characters. Sorry that I feel it's a bit bland. I couldn't get too immersed in the story because I have so many questions about the characters especially. If the author adds more details later, this story would be nearly perfect!

You have a knack to get the reader hooked with your unique style. It intrigued me to learn that you don't describe your characters so I was constantly imagining them on my own. That was a very different and unique experience. I felt the pain of the protagonist on so many occasions, great storytelling. 👏

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A "Should read" book, I love how straightforward it is and author's writing skill is a 100/100, It's enjoying since it's very straightforward for me.

It's an absolutely amazing story. I love how it gives the vibe of mystery. Just the reading the synopsis made me eager to read the story. It's perfectly plotted story by the author. KEEP IT UP author💙!

This book is totally amazing. Good work author. Can't stop from reading it. It's just perfect. Wish you success on this great book I know that it will turn out great.

Such a good novel. It has so much potential. Author-san I can not wait for more of this. The story is good, there is a nice premise, and I liked that the only thing that many WN authors fail to do is Character personality and development.

world background and conflicts were nicely portrayed. The intricate relationship among characters were interesting. all in all nice work 👍 👍