Y.R. Novella
I can really feel the suspense building in this story as a I read! There are some problems with basic conventions that make this story a little tricky to read (especially in regard to quotations because us readers don't know who's speaking) but it's not like irredeemably horrible. On a brighter note, the plot is pretty interesting!! Keep up the good work author ^u^
The plot is pretty good and the suspense seems thrilling enough to keep us entertained. Will definitely need to read more of it. I hope it gets creepier though because I love spooky stuff and I'm afraid am still waiting for even more scary parts. Also why is that mansion haunted I don't think you ever explained much about that
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