Author's 2nd Thoughts
*SPOILER ALERT*
Hey guys, At the moment, I am re-reading and fixing errors on my previous chapters. So, I won't be able to update chapters for now.
And, there's something I would like to ask for everyone those who are reading at this point.
1. Is having a weak Mc really that boring and B.s? I know it became a b.s when Cyrus has promising start yet suddenly turned out to be crippled.
I know already know before that I had a bad grammar so, I won't ask about it.
2. What are the possible and best way to handle b.s problems, please share some thoughts, since this novel is initially for everyone!
3. Should I give Cyrus short goals? not those far-fetched goals?
4. What are those you don't like about the character that I should remove?
5. Is having a weak-to-strong start that bad for eastern fantasy?
Those are the questions for now.
I would like everyone to understand that I want Cyrus to have a weak and pathetic start, and I want him to grow like stages before becoming strong. I mean, If I made Cyrus like not crippled from the start, then, all the powers he had acquired right now are totally available for him, he could easily plummet everyone with one strike and his peers couldn't do anything at him.
And the only one he could fight are those experienced old generations people, remember, his fire arts is not normal it has a skills list that if it turned into a book, it would be the size of an encyclopedia book, another one is, his supreme lightning is extremely powerful too since his spirit is practically a guardian and enforcer of laws of heaven, then we had Lily which is a divine phoenix, he can ask Lily to take over his body making him jump to tyrant rank while Lily can control his body and not only that, he also had a phoenix bloodline in the future chapters when his bone marrows completely absorbs the phoenix essence.
And Lynae, on the other hand, she can pump Cyrus high graded anima to his body as he can plummet everyone without getting tired!
Not only that, his sword techniques are extremely powerful too, theoretically speaking, if he could enhance his sword strikes with the supreme lightning that are used for divine retribution, he could practically cut a spatial tear in the space!
This can happen if Cyrus isn't crippled, and not kind.
Sadly, right now, Cyrus is half crippled, he is also too kind to people and his spirits. He also doesn't abuse power, if he knew when to stop.
And I even haven't introduced the female mc yet. This is the only thing I could give to you about her, she is a young master/mistress of Lightning Clan, she has a divine inheritance like Cyrus, she has a boyish personality, and pretty much op without constraint, unlike Cyrus, however, her path is towards revenge.
That's all, I hope I can get replies from you guys. Thank you.