The Villainess and I, her Zombie

fantastic writing quality and a very interesting concept, all let down by an extremely weak beginning and a real lack of vision as to what the characters are. a certain plot point regarding the "overwriting" of the MCs character was the tipping point for this novel being unsalvageable. If I need to wait for a novel to get good because an author royally screws up the start of the novel, it isn't going to get better. I cant wait for this series to end, so that the author can put their writing skills to better use on a different (good) story.

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im confused, why do people hate a book if its the genre they clearly hate? i also dont like the cold/ruthless/charming etc ceo stories, tho i dont go around hating on them cause its clearly not necessarily badly written, just not my cup of tea.

This novel really is amazing.It really deserves more recognition for how good it is.So please don't drop author................................................

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