The Villainess and her Victim

This is a very well written and interesting book. The characters aren’t your standard stereotypes and each have their own personalities. It’s a great read.

There are three chapters so it will be hard for me to determine to pace of novel. Aside from the story development, I am truly impressed by your writing style. The vocabularies are not repetitive and the word choice is great. (I noted some of the words hehe.) I was able to portray the looks of the characters within a few paragraphs. The scenarios are also described perfectly. I feel like I'm inside the novel itself. The world background is detailed and the punctuation marks, especially the commas, are used correctly. Nothing much to criticize about since the novel currently has three chapters. I wish all the best to author and keep on writing!

Nice. Can't say much since it's only three chapters, but what you have so far is enogh to pull me in. I'd actually want a FemC with spine for once, and this is shaping up to be something of the sort. Keep on writing👍

masterpiece novel .. .. it's way too short tho .. .no excessive drama ,very wholesome .i gave it 5 cus I enjoyed a lot .even at worst its only a 4.5 even if it's not ur preferred genre .its a definitely worthwhile read even if u don't like the genre just read for the wholesome

Very cute and fun story. The chapters aren't long but that doesn't affect the story

La historia me encantó, pero me hubiera gustado que tuviera más desarrollo. Esperemos que el autor no hubiera abandonado la historia después de dos años, y que pronto venga un seguimiento de está linda historia, pero con más drama. ////

I liked it over all kinda wish the story didn’t end tho.

Good novel to pass the time. Read it in about an hour or two. it's just a sweet novel. the ratings here aren't really relevant because it's only a short story. To summarise though, I enjoyed it.

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Such a lovely wholesome little story with two lovable leads, both have great character writing allowing the reader to see more of the opposites personality by each other’s perspective. Very cute, much like.

I'm speechless no words comes to my mind when I think of what to say about this. It was good, yes good, very good, I... Let's give it a 5 it was shorter than expected but tbh I got carried away reading it before I knew it I finished the whole thing and I seriously don't know what to feel about this, I was left speechless, no words it is! 3-4 hours I don't know but it took that much to finish 91 chapters, I got carried and blown away I guess?

Amazing. Honestly, this is awesome. Probably the only time so far I’ve given a 5-star review on a <100-chapter novel. Short, but overwhelmingly sweet. My only wish is for more; it’s too damn good, One of the best Yuri novels I’ve read, despite the length. Thank you author, for this absolute gem.