Nyxielle
Hi everyone, it's me, your author Nyxielle! I want to clarify some questions regarding this novel. 1. This is a slow-burn novel, so romance won't start immediately. 2. The novel will have 300-400 chapters or more ;) 3. There won't be any mature content. 4. This is a reverse harem book, meaning that there are multiple love interests. 5. I am a writer, but I'm still human at the end of the day, so I make grammatical errors and mistakes from time to time. So if you notice something grammatically incorrect or wrong, feel free to leave a comment, and I'll make sure to fix it! Thank you for taking the time to read, support and comment on my chapters <3
Lady Melissa is an extremely compelling character. The first was very well-written and showed how well you can express the emotions of the characters. That´s why I find it surprising that their emotions are written in a repetitive manner. I will continue reading because I really like the plot and the FL^^
[WARNING: SPOILERS ALERT] First things first, the beginning of the story is extremely hooking. The crown prince sounds like a flat-out jerk. And secondly, I'm in love with the MC. Lady Melissa is an extremely compelling character. In this novel, you'll find moments of tragedy, humour, romance, etc. All in all, this is a beautifully written novel, and I can't wait to discover what happens next. Putting the few grammatical errors and all that, I highly recommend this novel for light reading, I guarantee you won't be able to put this novel down after you start reading it. Love, mari!
This isn't my normal genre so its a little hard to tell if there are many cliches used in this, but as a novice reader in historical romance, this has set a high bar for me. The character work is great, and our mc's goal is clear as day which is a big plus for me. it's a little slow, to be honest and for some that might be a deal breaker but it adds a lot to our characters and the story. Good luck to the author.
first of all, I appreciate the creativity and insight of the author. secondly, the synopsis of this novel is so eye-catching and has the potential to attract many readers. Reading the story of female lead reminds me of the song "BELIEVER". I really loved how the author has described our strong-willed female lead. Keep up the great work author.
Honestly I really liked the book in the beginning however I dropped it because of how many repetitions Were in the book, for exapmle saying the Lady Melissa something something and Duke ....... Mieth over and over again. Honestly it annoyed me a lot but it was a good read while it lasted. I’m not saying the book isn’t good so read it if it interests you howveer I must warn other readers that there is, again A LOT of repetitions.
it's great story but I think you should make some improvement on the way you tell the readers, at the beginning on the confluct. I prefer you tell to the readers with full one chapter about their happy life, and the next chapter it's the conflict. I feel the emotion is plain. So the readers will hate the villain so much. not fall for him. But it's a good story and I need more chapter!