Lizabelle88
I enjoyed reading what's in the book so far. The story is descriptive without going overboard, and the characters are not cookie-cutter copies of each other. I like the conflict that has risen so far, and I enjoyed reading about the history of the MC. The dialogue is natural and realistic, and I hope you continue. Keep going, author!
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The author started pretty good and has a good concept of writing the story. All the best author. Hwaiting!!! βπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌβπΌ
wow , the more I read the more I am liking it imaoπππππlots of love from me , author sama keep it up [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Alright, after reading the 5 chapters that were available (as of writting this) I can only say, one thing "were is the rest?" Like seriously, were is it? This is one of the main reasons, I'm not a big fan of sarting to read a story with not many chapters, but, oh well, I'm a pacient person so I will wait for the newest chapters, as this got me hooked! Now to the review proper, setting is pretty good, I'm a sucker for romance add fantasy and you don't have my curiosity, you have my full attention, still with the setting good choice on the time period, in my opinion makes fantasy a lot better (but I'm not saying that fantasy in a more modern setting is bad) Now the characters really well made and good, these are the type of characters I like to see. Now the writting, just wonderfull, its incredebly well written and no mistakes that I took notice off! All in all this was a good read now what's missing is more chapters! P.S: I know I'm being a bit vague with the review, but I want who ever reads my review to go in just like me blind and enjoy this good and well made story!
First of all, I love the way how you've written the setting! The writing quality is alright although I think the transition can be a little less awkward. Seeing as this is only the first five chapters, I haven't seen much of the other characters. Nevertheless, I love MC's devotion to her family. Meanwhile, her father is the character I dislike the most (lol). Great job! I'll be waiting for more :>
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