Reviews of The Universal Villain


The Universal Villain


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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background



I love <3 this story for 3 reasons.... The MC is not a dense isekai protagonist like most fanfic on this website that honestly most of the time just aim for a harem MC is caculative and will not hesitate to do something if its for his own profits and towards his own goal. The system is also a very progressive system where it grows along side its user instead of the user growing with the system...MC is extremely smart and we can see that from the beggining with how he does things and has no reaction to human death. . I am going to wait till this stockpiles to binge but I love this novel with an Anti-Hero that does whatever is needed to get to his goal but the other reason I love this novel is because the Author is consistent..well at least till now with his daily uploads . Love It <3<3<3 . 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ 5✨ PERFECTION

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Great book with an evil MC. Usually, authors try to create an evil MC but turn it into a good MC who would help others without any reason and then try to justify that self sacrifice with some edginess and try to ACT like a villain. But your MC is not like that, your MC is actually evil, he doesn't act like evil. He doesn't care about the methods used for reaching his goal. And it is enjoyable watching the cast of RWBY ignorantly walk into the huge spiderweb known as the MC.


It’s got an interesting Premise and has a unique feel to it. The MC is not necessarily a good person and could be considered a villain(?) so far. It’s w great novel so far I’d recommend it


*Spoilers* Everything was going well until "Blake" came along. How is it that an evil mc like this would let a girl take advantage of him? Why did he not make her completely loyal to him like he did L1 and L2? It is as if the mc is much nicer to the female characters than the male characters. If it is a male character, he either kills them or makes them completely loyal, while if it's a female, he gives them a chance to benefit from his plans. Very stupid. For a moment, I almost thought this would be a truly evil mc turns out it is simply one of many fake ones. SMH. The writing quality is excellent, and the world background is decent; however, the story development went downhill very quickly, as well as the character design.


The old one was really good, so a new and polished version will most likely be even better than the old one.


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it's good the mc is villain but I haven't seen him do anything evil other than using so mind manipulation on blake which most ppl wont like but it's ok the grammar is also good it's too early to complain about its cons as for now it's ok im just wondering what are the crossover worlds and Imma give 5 stars cause creation is hard 😁


Overall i would give this a recommend read, compared to some of the fanfiction I've read this takes the cake for doing a unique experience of having a Villain protagonist that is well written and not too OP so much so that Plot Progression doesn't become out of the place. TLDR: Good Story 9.5/10 definitely gonna read again if i lose my memories.


One word: PERFECTION. Writing quality: 5*, no grammar mistakes and is quite easy to understand and comfortable to read. Story development: 5*, what do you expect from a ff with villain MC? Cool and exciting story development. VMC acts only for his own interests have almost no affection with anyone, which I really love very much. Character designs: 5*, again PERFECTION. MC is evil and will not hesitate to do evil stuff. He acts like a real villian and will do anything for gaining power. Updating stability: 5*(wanted to give 4*), I wish that there were more release per week. Best if a chapter once every two days. This is so addictive that I feel very sad when I completes reading the latest chapter. 😭 World background: 5*, Although I don't usually like to read RWBY ff, but I really recommend to read it very much. The world background is same, RWBY story. Overall: PERFECTION. Super addictive ff. Easy and simple to understand and fun to read. Easily comes in my top favourites.


Thriller story The action is great because I don't know rwby I enjoyed it, the character is great, but it doesn't make all the girls fall for it. I wish you success


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This is a lot more detailed than the unedited or previous one I like the character and how they manipulate people based on the things he knows about them and how he does risky things but plans them out to a tee.


this was one of the greatest fanfics i have ever read everything was balance and i can not compare it to others truly one of the greats......................


everything is just perfect 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. .. xyc


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Honestly... it's not great. It's not *bad*, but it certainly doesn't deserve it's four point eight star rating. I mean, he's in RWBY but he doesn't even have his aura unlocked. Why bother if you're just going to gacha him a bunch of random skills from other sources?


I have read many novels and many with villain genre, but this one is really on top of almost all of them. The only thing lacking is update rate. I also hope that shen's journey won't end in remnant world and the novels keeps it's quality in future .


Great read, i read this a while back and never got around to commenting because I just binged it, was a lot of fun. And I'm glad there is no romance in it at all, most great villain stories are ruined by romance.


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