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Xianxie
XianxieLv1Xianxie

i love how you write your characters, it makes the readers understand them easily! kudos to how you thought of the plot as well, very nice. kudos to you! <33

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Blackpaint
BlackpaintLv2Blackpaint

I enjoyed reading this story! Characters are full of humor and I like the writing style. The world building is crafted nicely, although I wish some of the stuffs (like how different talismans are used) are explained or introduced but maybe it's because the author avoids info dumps. Pace of the story is great as well. As for the writing quality, everything is good for me. I could also clearly imagine the scenes in the story. I'm excited to read more. Great job author!

Sir_WendoS
Sir_WendoSLv4Sir_WendoS

The details of the environment and the events are very precise. It really makes you synchronize with the story. I can't find any errors to the writing, making it quite pleasant to read. The tale starts very enticing in a way, and with the details, I can actually see what's happening. It keeps getting better and better, and I love it!!

Write_D_Words
Write_D_WordsLv11Write_D_Words

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Yi_Xi
Yi_XiLv5Yi_Xi

The story was very well written! And I suppose the writing style would also work perfectly if the author chose to write a comedy oriented novel. I really like this!

SabergKeys
SabergKeysLv2SabergKeys

Wow! That's all I can say from reading the first chapter already, the story is skillfully written. This will stay in my library and give it a vote, after all this deserves to be read my many people.

Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_ArcadianLv3Luminous_Arcadian

The story was really good. It has a great plotline and solid characterization. It was funny, especially at some parts that cackle me up. Although, there were also some parts that were confusing, like the sudden changes in point of view and the unseparated thoughts or the contents of the book to the narration. Still, it's in my library now, though.

Aravind_S
Aravind_SLv4Aravind_S

The Novel is well written. The plot is very engaging to read. Hope the Author will update with more stable chapters. Author work is much appreciated.

Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy named Raizel who'll embark on a journey to fulfil an oath he gave to his dying friend. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially kaizel. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

Seishi_
Seishi_Lv2Seishi_

Hmm..After reading, I will say that the novel is easy to understand and to imagine because of your descriptive paragraphs/dialogues in the novel. The hype becomes stronger every chapter. Good luck to your WSA Journey and Keep it up.

Roonman
RoonmanLv1Roonman

I really like this novel's premise, it's kinda like magic, old ages, and modern ages all meshed together. The writing on it is very well done, my only complaint would be that it's hard to understand who's perspecttive the story is from, I don't mean dialogue, but the story itself. other than that, amazing job!

TitanMaster
TitanMasterLv1TitanMaster

This gets you into action right from the start, which I enjoy. The descriptions are also very well done and I enjoy the characters personalities. Good job!

Kim_Aira_
Kim_Aira_Lv2Kim_Aira_

Keep up the good work. Just started reading and I can see myself reading the last chapter with the exact same love and excitement... Adding to my favourite list. Tysm for this work...

MrWritter
MrWritterLv3MrWritter

Magical, for sure would be the right definition for this story, well explained in the fights and dialogues, well described and with a rich world, and of course clearly amazing characters.

Vanilla_Chino
Vanilla_ChinoLv3Vanilla_Chino

I really liked how much attention to detail went into the beginning of setting up the world and it’s character. The author is very well versed in their writing skills, an experienced one. I enjoyed the few first chapters I read. Keep it up author, you’re work is very appreciated!

Jyoti_Roy
Jyoti_RoyLv5Jyoti_Roy

I liked the story a lot.The plot , character development are all good.I hope the author start updating it again soon.

Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1Darine_ALRAMMAH

This is actually a hidden gem on this app! I love everything about it! Your style makes the reader submerged in every detail. This plot definitely exceeded my expectations. The title and book cover on the other hand totally meet the content. Added to library and can't wait for more!