Dark_Scholars
I enjoyed reading this story! Characters are full of humor and I like the writing style. The world building is crafted nicely, although I wish some of the stuffs (like how different talismans are used) are explained or introduced but maybe it's because the author avoids info dumps. Pace of the story is great as well. As for the writing quality, everything is good for me. I could also clearly imagine the scenes in the story. I'm excited to read more. Great job author!
The details of the environment and the events are very precise. It really makes you synchronize with the story. I can't find any errors to the writing, making it quite pleasant to read. The tale starts very enticing in a way, and with the details, I can actually see what's happening. It keeps getting better and better, and I love it!!
The story was really good. It has a great plotline and solid characterization. It was funny, especially at some parts that cackle me up. Although, there were also some parts that were confusing, like the sudden changes in point of view and the unseparated thoughts or the contents of the book to the narration. Still, it's in my library now, though.
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy named Raizel who'll embark on a journey to fulfil an oath he gave to his dying friend. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially kaizel. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
I really like this novel's premise, it's kinda like magic, old ages, and modern ages all meshed together. The writing on it is very well done, my only complaint would be that it's hard to understand who's perspecttive the story is from, I don't mean dialogue, but the story itself. other than that, amazing job!