The supreme sovereign system

Well, this case is... peculiarly. My original language is spanish, so sorry for my spelling mistakes or gramatical. I believe that good ideas, but execution failures. By examples: The Alfonso's construction as protagonist is original, his aparience is peculiarly and attractive for a MC. But, his attitude as a person is some irregular. One word: harem. It seems like is not general opinion, but, the romance it looks very dull when there is more of a loving interest without conflict in the middle. Come on, they are goddesess, one of them is basically one nun, why doesn't theres it conflict? Not to say what's up plus womans that are attracted by Alfonso, and the number increases according you pass the episodes. Gives pathetic aura both at protagonist like the female cast. Some of these crushes come out of nowhere, all olympus goddesess they will want a son of Alfonso? Where was the dignity? That returns to the flat and predictable female cast, at least those next him. I almost can see the development of Athena coming: she admired Alfonso for strategies copy paste of history's random legion, she falls in love. Good, ready next on the list. I do not say that Polygamy history can't be good, but in this case the subject is being mishandled. Think it would be more interesting see the rest crushes of another humans, or gods, or nobody. See interactions with the humanity and the world instead of focus attention on a character. Due to the previous point it is difficult to take another male character seriously on the side of the MC (who with so much attention and for other factors is dangerously touching the title of Gary Stu), especially if he tries to flirt with a female character close to him. It makes you want to say "hit it, champion. It will be for the next one" and although so far it has only happened to filler characters, it is still a bit annoying. Name of character and location they are generic, well, only a little generic. And... Greycastle, Coiling Dragon? Really? Alfonso abilities they are interesting, despite being temporal control abilities. But, integrate close combat arts is excesive and counterproductive for Alfonse's background. He is a old man, not a generic Final Fantasy monk. Well, walking stick physical abilities they could be passable. The world of the novel is good, especially the current location (for the moment in which this message the latest chapter is 293). But, the champions they have many limitations compared the Alfonso team, for the moment (the ability varierity it seems limited for the rest of the world). And, the system is no longer relevant. apart from being what attracts gods to the world. Sometimes i feel that the count of points is bad, but i'm not sure... well, does not matter. My questiong is: where is the variety of items? The MC only buy basic weapons, seeds and "potions" for increase the power and evolve of their animal companions. There is a lot interesting and good ideas think they will be relegated to second plane in favor of increases the power of Alfonso and his personal life (or put another way, his sex life). It's a waste how many female character congregates the Alfonso's emotional circle, i would be interesting if one or more of them (goddess or not) had a character evolution and forget his crush, or change his sentiments for another character. And... maybe to integrate character to contribute in the kingdom without the knowledge of Alfonso be superior or a "great" inspiration for this character, if Athena learned about military strategy thanks to Alfonso... even if the argument that we can all learn something new is present, it sounds unreal. But this is an example, i still trust you. The novel meets entertaining, i only say what i think. I hope to continue reading the novel for quite some time. Bye.

Bro I do love your novel. Its really good, I had read this types of novel a lot but usually in this kianda novel you expect herem and all that and hero is always a good guy who acts like a hero or somthing but this novel is pretty mature revels the true nature of people, it shows that MC can sometimes be in a deep **** to. Finally the best thing I think about this novel is although MC is weak compared others and his harem members but he make a stand for himself and his peoples and expect nothing from them. Well this is my personal thoughts I dont know what others think about this novel but this is what I think....so keep it up keep writing and know that I will always read your novel.

The story is interesting but the grammar has many mistakes although I can understand what you are trying to convey. You need to look for an editor. Once you release many chapters and please, don't take this comment too hard. You have potential it's just the grammar that is holding you back.

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Book itself has interesting stories and mythology. However it is riddled with terrible grammar and inconsistent use of names, the author cannot even decide whether to use Artemis or Artemisa, and so on. Overall an above average story partially ruined by lack of attention.

the spelling sucks, need to check info before use ing or give where you got it from. please add the i don,t stick to what is in the history book line

Read up to half of chapter 1. I myself am not very good with correct terminology when it comes to writing but the amount of mistakes in first chapter ruined the stories immersiveness , causing me to constantly re read lines to understand wtf is going on

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At the beginning the grammar is pretty bad but the author get an editor and it gets a bit better some of the mythology is not entirely correct but it's also a fiction story so who gives a f*** all in all though I really like it; I started 3 days ago with there being 251 chapters and finish waiting for more.🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤💚🖤

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The story itself is alright and I have no problems with it, however I have a lot of problems with grammar hence I will no longer be reading, I would still recommend this novel to some people who don't mind these type of things.

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I love it 😻 please continue with your great work 💙💙 👍

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Chapter 1 didn't read full chapter due to errors. So unless there is an editor this novel WILL FAIL Dont know if story line is good or not which is a shame due to me e joying these novels.

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I came across this novel by mistake but I'm really happy it happened I love Greek mythology and this story is really well written (story wise) the English is really bad at the beginning but it gets WAY better, but you have some mistakes here and there... Artemis and demeter are not sisters and gaia is chrono's mother not sister